Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Thí sinh
I'm not really enjoy buying shoes. I buy shoes only twice a year when the old ones were broken and I always perceive the com comfortables of a shoes. So if I buy a shoes that means I will dress it.
Giám khảo
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Thí sinh
Yes, I bought a shoes for my mom as a birthday gift at last month and and I think it's a good way. It's a convenient ways to umm, buy whatever you want.
Giám khảo
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Thí sinh
MMM, I don't like spend too much on shoes. Umm, I think it's about 500. And if I really like a pair of shoes, uh, like, like their designs, uh, I will spend more.
Giám khảo
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Thí sinh
I prefer comfortable shoes because nowadays I always stay at school so I need to work to the class so the comfortable ones is my go to choice. But if once you stay are both comfortable and fashionable it's the best.
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Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“I'm not really enjoy”应为“I don't really enjoy”，“perceive the com comfortables”表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的表达，并注意句子结构，使回答更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: I don't really enjoy buying shoes. I usually buy new ones only twice a year when my old shoes are worn out. I always prioritize comfort when choosing shoes because I want them to be practical.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，如“a shoes”应为“a pair of shoes”，“at last month”应为“last month”，以及“convenient ways”应为“a convenient way”。建议注意冠词和单复数的使用，避免重复词汇，使表达更准确。
Ví dụ: Yes, I bought a pair of shoes for my mom as a birthday gift last month. I think buying shoes online is a good way because it's very convenient and you can find many options.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“I don't like spend”应为“I don't like to spend”，以及表达不够连贯。建议减少语气词，使用更准确的句型，并且具体说明货币单位以增加清晰度。
Ví dụ: I don't like to spend too much money on shoes. Usually, I spend about 500 yuan. However, if I really like the design of a pair, I am willing to spend more.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达不清的问题，如“stay at school so I need to work to the class”不通顺，且“the comfortable ones is”主谓不一致。建议使用更准确的表达，注意主谓一致，并且使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because I spend most of my time at school and need to walk to classes. Comfortable shoes are my go-to choice. However, if shoes are both comfortable and fashionable, that would be ideal.
Ngữ pháp
× I'm not really enjoy buying shoes.
✓ I don't really enjoy buying shoes.
这里动词 enjoy 需要用动词原形或动名词形式，但前面有助动词 do，所以 enjoy 应该用原形。原句中使用了 am not really enjoy，语法错误。正确表达是 I don't really enjoy。
× I always perceive the com comfortables of a shoes.
✓ I always perceive the comfort of shoes.
comfortables 不是正确的名词形式，应该用 comfort。a shoes 中 shoes 是复数，前面不应该用不定冠词 a。
× So if I buy a shoes that means I will dress it.
✓ So if I buy a pair of shoes, that means I will wear them.
shoes 是复数名词，不能用 a 修饰，应该用 a pair of shoes。dress it 用法不当，穿鞋应该用 wear them。
× Yes, I bought a shoes for my mom as a birthday gift at last month and and I think it's a good way.
✓ Yes, I bought a pair of shoes for my mom as a birthday gift last month and I think it's a good way.
a shoes 错误，shoes 是复数，应该用 a pair of shoes。at last month 中的 at 不需要，正确用法是 last month。
× It's a convenient ways to umm, buy whatever you want.
✓ It's a convenient way to, umm, buy whatever you want.
ways 是复数，前面用的是单数冠词 a，应该保持单复数一致，改为 way。
× I don't like spend too much on shoes.
✓ I don't like spending too much on shoes.
like 后面接动名词形式 spending，而不是动词原形 spend。
× the comfortable ones is my go to choice.
✓ the comfortable ones are my go-to choice.
ones 是复数，谓语动词应该用复数 are。
× But if once you stay are both comfortable and fashionable it's the best.
✓ But if they are both comfortable and fashionable, it's the best.
句子结构混乱，应该用 if they are both comfortable and fashionable。
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