Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên tránh lặp từ "shoes" quá nhiều và có thể thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể được nối mạch lạc hơn bằng cách sử dụng từ nối.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love buying shoes and usually purchase new pairs about three or four times a year. I get really excited whenever I find a stylish pair that fits well, as it adds to my collection and boosts my confidence.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ cho chính xác hơn, ví dụ như "I bought" thay vì "I have bought" khi nói về một việc đã xảy ra trong quá khứ cụ thể. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp hơn để mô tả chất lượng sản phẩm. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I bought a pair of red and white Jordan 1 shoes on Shopee, but I was quite disappointed because the quality was poor and did not meet my expectations.

Gợi ý: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt cho chính xác hơn, ví dụ "My shoes are all fake, so they don't cost much." Ngoài ra, nên tránh dùng từ "fake" vì có thể gây ấn tượng tiêu cực, bạn có thể nói "affordable" hoặc "budget-friendly". Hãy thêm các chi tiết cụ thể và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Most of my shoes are budget-friendly replicas, so I usually spend around 700,000 Dong per pair, which I find quite affordable.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "both factors" thay vì "both factor" và "make me feel comfortable" thay vì "make me feel comfort". Câu trả lời nên mạch lạc hơn bằng cách sử dụng từ nối và tránh lặp từ. Bạn cũng nên cung cấp thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Ví dụ: I prefer shoes that combine both fashion and comfort because I want to look good while feeling at ease. Nowadays, many brands design stylish shoes that are also comfortable to wear all day.

× I am a shoes lover so I buy shoes quite often, about 3 or 4 times a year and I feel really excited when I have a new pair of shoes.

✓ I am a shoe lover so I buy shoes quite often, about 3 or 4 times a year and I feel really excited when I have a new pair of shoes.

The word 'shoes' is plural, but when describing a person who likes shoes, the singular form 'shoe lover' is correct. 'Shoes lover' is incorrect because 'shoes' is a plural noun and cannot directly modify another noun in this way.

× Yes, I have bought a pair of shoes online that I buy on a Shopee and I feel quite disappointed cause the uh cause the quality of that shoes is awkward.

✓ Yes, I have bought a pair of shoes online that I bought on Shopee and I feel quite disappointed because the quality of those shoes is poor.

The preposition 'on' is correctly used with 'Shopee' as it is a platform, but the phrase 'that I buy on a Shopee' is incorrect because 'a Shopee' is wrong; 'Shopee' is a proper noun and does not need an article. Also, 'cause' should be 'because' for formal correctness. 'That shoes' should be 'those shoes' because 'shoes' is plural and requires the plural demonstrative pronoun 'those'. 'Awkward' is not appropriate to describe quality; 'poor' or 'bad' is better.

× cause the uh cause the quality of that shoes is awkward.

✓ because the quality of those shoes is poor.

The demonstrative pronoun 'that' is singular and does not agree with the plural noun 'shoes'. The correct plural form is 'those'.

× Well my shoes all is fake so it doesn't cut it's uh, cost.

✓ Well, all my shoes are fake so they don't cost much.

The subject 'shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'it' and 'it's' incorrectly refer to 'shoes' which is plural; the correct pronoun is 'they'. The phrase 'doesn't cut it's cost' is awkward and incorrect; 'they don't cost much' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Well my shoes all is fake so it doesn't cut it's uh, cost.

✓ Well, all my shoes are fake so they don't cost much.

The pronouns 'it' and 'it's' are singular and do not agree with the plural noun 'shoes'. The correct plural pronoun is 'they' and the verb should agree accordingly.

× Not too much to buy each of them, about 700,000 Dong for each pair of shoes and I feel it quite cheap.

✓ I don't spend too much on each of them, about 700,000 Dong for each pair of shoes, and I feel it's quite cheap.

The phrase 'Not too much to buy each of them' is incomplete and awkward. It should be a complete sentence with a subject and verb, such as 'I don't spend too much on each of them'. Also, 'I feel it quite cheap' should be 'I feel it's quite cheap' to include the verb 'is'.

× Not too much to buy each of them, about 700,000 Dong for each pair of shoes and I feel it quite cheap.

✓ I don't spend too much on each of them, about 700,000 Dong for each pair of shoes, and I feel it's quite cheap.

The pronoun 'it' is vague here; 'it's' (it is) is needed to link the subject and adjective properly.

× I will choose the shoes that have both factor, both that factor, uh, fashionable shoes and make me feel comfort when I wear it.

✓ I will choose shoes that have both factors: fashionable shoes and make me feel comfortable when I wear them.

The word 'factor' should be plural 'factors' because there are two qualities mentioned. 'Comfort' is a noun; the adjective 'comfortable' is needed to describe the feeling. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to 'shoes' which is plural.

× I will choose the shoes that have both factor, both that factor, uh, fashionable shoes and make me feel comfort when I wear it.

✓ I will choose shoes that have both factors: fashionable shoes and make me feel comfortable when I wear them.

The noun 'comfort' is incorrectly used instead of the adjective 'comfortable' to describe the feeling. The adjective form is required here.

× I will choose the shoes that have both factor, both that factor, uh, fashionable shoes and make me feel comfort when I wear it.

✓ I will choose shoes that have both factors: fashionable shoes and make me feel comfortable when I wear them.

The pronoun 'it' is singular and does not agree with the plural noun 'shoes'. The correct pronoun is 'them'.

× And nowadays a lot of brand, uh, create a fashionable shoes wear comfort.

✓ And nowadays a lot of brands create fashionable shoes that are comfortable to wear.

'Brand' should be plural 'brands' to agree with 'a lot of'. 'A fashionable shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and does not need 'a'. The phrase 'wear comfort' is incorrect; it should be 'comfortable to wear' to describe the shoes.