Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Instead of saying "over a week or a month," specify a clearer frequency like "once a month." Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating "shoes" multiple times. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes and usually purchase a new pair about once a month. I like trying different styles and brands to keep my collection varied.

Gợi ý: There are some grammatical errors and unclear phrases here. For example, "shoe breads" should be "shoe brands." Also, use correct verb forms and clearer explanations. Adding linking words will improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online because some brands are not available in my local city. Buying online offers me more options and convenience compared to shopping locally.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and has some hesitation. Try to give a direct response with clear structure. Avoid filler words like "uh." Also, explain your reasoning with linking words for better coherence.

Ví dụ: The amount I spend on shoes depends on my pocket money. If I have more, I usually spend about half of it on shoes because I value quality footwear.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contains errors like "vegetable shoes." Try to organize your ideas clearly, use correct vocabulary, and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain your preference logically.

Ví dụ: I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes. Comfortable shoes are great for activities like running or going to the gym, while fashionable shoes are suitable for parties and special events.

× I often buy shoes over a week or a month and I buy different kind of shoes, different brands of shoes.

✓ I often buy shoes over a week or a month and I buy different kinds of shoes, different brands of shoes.

The phrase 'different kind of shoes' is incorrect because 'kind' should be plural when referring to multiple types. The correct form is 'different kinds of shoes' to match the plural noun 'shoes'.

× It give me more benefits than buying it from my hometown city.

✓ It gives me more benefits than buying them from my hometown city.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'shoes' which is plural. The correct pronoun is 'them'. Also, the verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'It' referring to 'buying shoes online'.

× It give me more benefits than buying it from my hometown city.

✓ It gives me more benefits than buying it from my hometown city.

The verb 'give' should be in the third person singular form 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'It'.

× So I buy uh, use 50% of my pocket money in buying shoes.

✓ So I buy, uh, and use 50% of my pocket money to buy shoes.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to express purpose is 'to' as in 'to buy shoes'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding 'and' to connect the actions properly.

× comfortable shoes that I can wear in gyms, I can do running in them and it it are very comfortable throughout the running and the vegetable shoes I can wear in parties, weddings and other occasional events.

✓ comfortable shoes that I can wear in gyms, I can run in them and they are very comfortable throughout the running, and the fashionable shoes I can wear in parties, weddings and other occasional events.

The phrase 'it it are' is incorrect; 'they are' is correct for plural 'shoes'. Also, 'do running' is better expressed as 'run'. The word 'vegetable shoes' seems to be a mishearing or typo; 'fashionable shoes' fits the context better.