Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and clear by directly answering the question first, then adding specific details. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'during the festive' twice. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes because they can change the look of my outfit. I usually buy them occasionally, especially during festive seasons when there are heavy sales and discounts. I prefer shoes that are of good quality and last a long time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Focus on giving a clear and direct response. Use linking words to explain details like discounts, features, and guarantees. Avoid unnecessary or confusing words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online from Flipkart. I got a 70% discount, so the shoes cost only ₹1000. Moreover, they had good features like added comfort and came with a one-year guarantee, which means the company can replace them if needed.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and a bit confusing. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Be specific about your spending habits and reasons.

Ví dụ: I usually spend a moderate amount on shoes. I only buy new pairs when I really need them, and I wait for sales or discounts to get a good deal. This way, I can buy good quality shoes that last a long time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Make sure to directly state your preference and explain why, using clear and simple sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because comfort is very important in everything, including clothing. Comfortable shoes give my feet a sense of relaxation, which is essential for me.

× Yes, I like buying shoes very much at it change my outfit look and as well as I buy on the occasional occasion during the festive during the festive season that have a great have a heavy sales and discount and they and they have a good quality which lasts for a long time.

✓ Yes, I like buying shoes very much as it changes my outfit look and I also buy on occasional occasions during the festive season when there are great sales and discounts, and they have good quality which lasts for a long time.

The sentence has singular and plural mismatches such as 'it change' which should be 'it changes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also, 'occasional occasion' is redundant; 'occasional occasions' is better. 'have a heavy sales' is incorrect; 'sales' is plural so 'have heavy sales' is correct. Correcting these improves subject-verb agreement and plural usage.

× Yes, I like buying shoes very much at it change my outfit look and as well as I buy on the occasional occasion during the festive during the festive season that have a great have a heavy sales and discount and they and they have a good quality which lasts for a long time.

✓ Yes, I like buying shoes very much as it changes my outfit look and I also buy on occasional occasions during the festive season when there are great sales and discounts, and they have good quality which lasts for a long time.

The verb 'change' should be 'changes' to agree with the third person singular subject 'it'. This is a common third person singular verb agreement error.

× Yes, I like buying shoes very much at it change my outfit look and as well as I buy on the occasional occasion during the festive during the festive season that have a great have a heavy sales and discount and they and they have a good quality which lasts for a long time.

✓ Yes, I like buying shoes very much as it changes my outfit look and I also buy on occasional occasions during the festive season when there are great sales and discounts, and they have good quality which lasts for a long time.

The phrase 'that have a great have a heavy sales and discount' is incorrect. It should be 'when there are great sales and discounts' to correctly use 'there be' structure for existence of sales and discounts.

× US affably reminisce I ordered a pair of shoes from ecommerce website name Flipkart. Whichever heavy discount of 70 percentage and it cost only ₹1000 and apart from this is have a certain feature such as it include add form and also have a guarantee of one year that can that company can give you replace.

✓ I ordered a pair of shoes from an e-commerce website named Flipkart, which had a heavy discount of 70 percent and it cost only ₹1000. Apart from this, it has certain features such as an insole and also a one-year guarantee that the company can use to replace the shoes.

The sentence has past tense errors like 'Whichever heavy discount' which is unclear and 'is have' which is incorrect. 'Include add form' is unclear and likely meant 'includes an insole'. Correcting to past tense verbs and clearer expressions improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× US affably reminisce I ordered a pair of shoes from ecommerce website name Flipkart. Whichever heavy discount of 70 percentage and it cost only ₹1000 and apart from this is have a certain feature such as it include add form and also have a guarantee of one year that can that company can give you replace.

✓ I ordered a pair of shoes from an e-commerce website named Flipkart, which had a heavy discount of 70 percent and it cost only ₹1000. Apart from this, it has certain features such as an insole and also a one-year guarantee that the company can use to replace the shoes.

The phrase 'from ecommerce website name Flipkart' should be 'from an e-commerce website named Flipkart' to correctly use prepositions and articles. Also, 'give you replace' is incorrect; it should be 'use to replace' or 'replace'.

× I spend moderately money on the shoes because whenever I need new pair of shoes I then and then I only buy and I do wait for a time for a great deal and have a sales and discount on that and then and then I buy and I buy a for good quality of shoes which last for a long time.

✓ I spend a moderate amount of money on shoes because whenever I need a new pair of shoes, I wait for a great deal or sales and discounts, and then I buy good quality shoes which last for a long time.

The phrase 'moderately money' is incorrect; it should be 'a moderate amount of money'. 'have a sales and discount' is incorrect; 'sales' is plural and should be preceded by 'have' but the sentence structure is awkward. Also, 'a for good quality of shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'good quality shoes'. Correcting singular/plural and article usage improves clarity.

× I spend moderately money on the shoes because whenever I need new pair of shoes I then and then I only buy and I do wait for a time for a great deal and have a sales and discount on that and then and then I buy and I buy a for good quality of shoes which last for a long time.

✓ I spend a moderate amount of money on shoes because whenever I need a new pair, I wait for a great deal or sales and discounts, and then I buy good quality shoes which last for a long time.

The repeated use of 'and then and then' is redundant and incorrect. Using conjunctions properly to connect ideas improves sentence flow and clarity.

× I prefer to buy a comfortable shoes as their comfort desire would be key is important in a in everything such as cloth and as well as most important issues that can give your food food as a sense of relaxation.

✓ I prefer to buy comfortable shoes as comfort is key and important in everything such as clothes, and it is also important to have shoes that give your feet a sense of relaxation.

The phrase 'a comfortable shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and should not have 'a'. Also, 'cloth' should be plural 'clothes'. 'food food' is likely a typo for 'foot'. Correcting singular/plural and word choice improves meaning.

× I prefer to buy a comfortable shoes as their comfort desire would be key is important in a in everything such as cloth and as well as most important issues that can give your food food as a sense of relaxation.

✓ I prefer to buy comfortable shoes as comfort is key and important in everything such as clothes, and it is also important to have shoes that give your feet a sense of relaxation.

The use of 'their comfort desire' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'comfort is key'. Also, 'your food food' is incorrect; it should be 'your feet'. Correct pronoun and noun usage is necessary for clarity.