Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lặp từ và có một số lỗi phát âm hoặc từ không chính xác (ví dụ: 'show my show' nên là 'show my style', 'new questions' nên là 'new collections'). Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy chú ý phát âm và chọn từ phù hợp hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes because they help express my personal style. I usually purchase new pairs about once a month, especially during sales or when new collections are released.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'I have I had buy a shoes' nên là 'I have bought shoes'). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp đúng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ chính xác để mô tả nền tảng mua hàng trực tuyến.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online before. Nowadays, many people use social media platforms or online stores like Shopee to shop conveniently.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, câu chưa hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp về số tiền hoặc phạm vi chi tiêu, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy tránh nói lặp và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

Ví dụ: It depends on the brand. Sometimes I buy shoes from local brands, which can be more expensive than regular ones. For example, Adidas shoes usually cost me around 100 dollars.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý kiến rõ ràng nhưng cấu trúc câu chưa mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'a comfortable shoes' nên là 'comfortable shoes'). Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và liên kết ý tốt hơn để thể hiện quan điểm của mình.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because they feel better to wear. Although fashionable shoes look nice, they often don't have the same quality or comfort as comfortable ones.

× I love buying shoes because I think they can really show my show and show my personal style.

✓ I love buying shoes because I think they can really show my style and show my personal style.

The word 'show' is incorrectly used instead of 'style'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but since it affects meaning, it should be corrected. 'Show' is a noun meaning a performance, while 'style' refers to personal fashion. The sentence should use 'style' to make sense.

× especially when they are sales or new questions.

✓ especially when there are sales or new collections.

The phrase 'they are sales or new questions' is incorrect. 'Sales' is a plural noun and should be preceded by 'there are' to indicate existence (There be issue). 'New questions' is likely a mishearing or misuse; 'new collections' or 'new releases' fits better in the context of buying shoes. The preposition 'when they are' is incorrect here; 'when there are' is correct.

× especially when they are sales or new questions.

✓ especially when there are sales or new collections.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'they are' to indicate existence. The correct form is 'there are' to express that sales or new collections exist at that time.

× Yes, I have of course, you know, social media platform nowadays is very common to everyone and so yeah, I have I had buy a shoes from soapy, which is umm, the online uh, buying platform.

✓ Yes, of course. You know, social media platforms nowadays are very common to everyone, and so yeah, I have bought shoes from Soapy, which is, umm, an online buying platform.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'I have I had buy a shoes' is incorrect; the correct past participle form 'bought' should be used after 'have'. 'Shoes' is plural, so 'a shoes' is incorrect. 'Social media platform' should be plural 'platforms' to match 'are very common'. Also, 'is' should be 'are' to agree with plural subject. The sentence is corrected for past tense and subject-verb agreement.

× social media platform nowadays is very common to everyone

✓ social media platforms nowadays are very common to everyone

'Social media platform' is singular, but the context implies multiple platforms, so it should be plural 'platforms'. The verb 'is' should agree with plural subject, so it changes to 'are'.

× I have I had buy a shoes from soapy

✓ I have bought shoes from Soapy

'Shoes' is plural, so 'a shoes' is incorrect. Also, 'I have I had buy' is incorrect verb form; the correct present perfect form is 'I have bought'.

× I buy shoes from a local brand.

✓ I buy shoes from local brands.

'A local brand' is singular, but the context suggests buying from various local brands, so plural 'brands' is more appropriate. Also, 'from a local brand' is acceptable if referring to one brand, but the original sentence is ambiguous. This correction assumes plural for generality.

× a comfortable shoes is the good idea to, to wear

✓ comfortable shoes are a good idea to wear

'Shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'a comfortable shoes' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'shoes', which is incorrect. The article 'a' should be removed or the noun changed to singular 'shoe'.

× A fashionable shoes. It's gotta be like maybe the, the quality is not good as much as the comfortable shoes.

✓ Fashionable shoes, their quality is maybe not as good as comfortable shoes.

'A fashionable shoes' incorrectly uses singular article 'a' with plural noun 'shoes'. Also, 'It's gotta be like maybe' is informal and unclear. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness. 'Not good as much as' should be 'not as good as' for correct comparison.

× And yeah, I think it's make me feel more comfortable.

✓ And yeah, I think it makes me feel more comfortable.

The verb 'make' should be in third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue (Third person singular issue).