Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and provide specific reasons using linking words. For example, explain your feelings about buying shoes and how often you do it, with clear reasons.

Ví dụ: I don't particularly enjoy buying shoes, but I usually purchase new ones about twice a month because my old shoes wear out quickly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Use a clear topic sentence and linking words to explain your experience. Avoid filler words and provide specific details about when and why you bought shoes online.

Ví dụ: Yes, I bought shoes online last year because it was my mother's birthday, and I wanted to surprise her with a gift.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Provide a direct response with specific details and use linking words to explain your reasons. Also, clarify the currency and amount you spend.

Ví dụ: I usually spend around 400 dollars on shoes because I believe comfort is the most important factor when choosing footwear.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains many hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to speak more fluently, use linking words, and provide clear reasons with specific details.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because they help me feel relaxed, especially since my job requires me to stand all day.

× I didn't.

✓ I don't.

The student is responding to a present tense question about liking to buy shoes. Using 'didn't' (past tense) is incorrect here; the present tense 'don't' should be used to match the question's tense.

× I don't like buy shoes.

✓ I don't like buying shoes.

After 'like', the verb should be in the '-ing' form. 'Like buy' is incorrect; it should be 'like buying' to be grammatically correct.

× And because it is not use, not not because.

✓ And because they are not used, not because anything else.

The phrase 'it is not use' is incorrect; 'use' should be the past participle 'used' and refer to plural 'they' (shoes). The sentence is unclear and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× I have the urban trains online.

✓ I have bought shoes online.

'The urban trains' is incorrect and unrelated. The student likely meant 'bought shoes online'. The pronoun and noun usage is incorrect here.

× last year's I bought, I bought a shoes online

✓ Last year, I bought shoes online.

'Last year's' is incorrect; it should be 'Last year'. Also, 'a shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural and does not take 'a'.

× my mother, uh, birthday coming

✓ my mother's birthday was coming

Possessive form 'mother's' is needed to indicate the birthday belongs to the mother. Also, 'was coming' fits better for past context.

× I was coming, I, I brought.

✓ I was coming, so I bought it.

The phrase is unclear and incomplete. 'I brought' is incorrect; the past tense of 'buy' is 'bought'. The sentence needs to be completed for clarity.

× I often spend 400 on my shoes

✓ I often spend 400 on shoes

'My shoes' is less natural here; 'shoes' is better. Also, specifying currency would improve clarity, but not required here.

× because I think shoes is comfortable

✓ because I think shoes are comfortable

'Shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'.

× if the shoes isn't comfortable.

✓ if the shoes aren't comfortable.

'Shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'aren't' instead of 'isn't'.