Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应更直接地回应问题，避免重复和语法错误。可以简洁表达购买鞋子的频率，并给出具体原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like buying shoes, but I don't buy them very often. Usually, I only buy new shoes when my old ones become too small or uncomfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答应更流畅，避免重复和犹豫词。表达观点时应更清晰，使用连词使句子连贯。

Ví dụ: No, I have never bought shoes online because I prefer to try them on to check the size and comfort. Buying online makes me nervous since I can't feel or see the shoes in person.

Gợi ý: 回答应更具体且结构清晰，避免重复和语法错误。可以直接说明通常花费的金额及原因。

Ví dụ: I usually spend around $200 on shoes because I want to buy comfortable ones that fit well and last a long time.

Gợi ý: 回答应更简洁明了，避免语音填充词。表达观点时应使用连词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because even if a pair is fashionable, I won't buy them if they are not comfortable.

× But for shoes I didn't buy it very very often and I buy shoes only when I feel and the shoes is too small and too narrow and it's don't suit for me.

✓ But for shoes, I don't buy them very often and I buy shoes only when I feel the shoes are too small and too narrow and they don't suit me.

这里'shoes'是复数，不能用单数形式的'it'，应该用复数代词'them'。另外，'the shoes is'应改为'the shoes are'，因为'shoes'是复数，动词要用复数形式。'it's don't suit'中'it's'是单数，后面接复数动词'don't'不正确，应改为'they don't suit'。

× But for shoes I didn't buy it very very often and I buy shoes only when I feel and the shoes is too small and too narrow and it's don't suit for me.

✓ But for shoes, I don't buy them very often and I buy shoes only when I feel the shoes are too small and too narrow and they don't suit me.

句子中时态不一致，前半句用过去时'didn't buy'，后半句用一般现在时'buy'，应统一用一般现在时表达习惯性动作。

× I will buy ones I like.

✓ I will buy ones that I like.

'ones'作为代词时，后面需要加关系代词'that'引导定语从句，表示'我喜欢的那些'。

× Oh for this, I never buy shoes online because I I think buy shoes I need to try the size and I I just want to umm attack it and uh the things online.

✓ Oh for this, I never buy shoes online because I think when buying shoes I need to try the size and I just want to touch them and the things online.

句子中'try the size'表达不准确，应该是'try on the shoes to check the size'，这里简化为'try the size'也可，但更自然的是'try them on'。另外，'attack it'应为'touch them'，'attack'用错了。

× I I can't feel it. I just can't watch it.

✓ I can't feel them. I just can't see them.

这里指代复数的'shoes'，不能用单数代词'it'，应使用复数代词'them'。另外，'watch'用法不当，应该用'see'表示看见。

× Maybe cost uh, $200, umm, because I think umm, the price I can afford is about uh, 300 or $200 and umm, maybe try this, this shoes I will be more comfortable.

✓ Maybe it costs about $200, because I think the price I can afford is about $200 or $300, and maybe trying these shoes will be more comfortable for me.

'shoes'是复数，前面不能用'this'，应改为'these'。另外，'cost'作为动词需要主语，改为'it costs'。

× MMM, I think comfortable shoes is more, uh, important for me because if the SH, although the shoes is really fashionable and really highlights, you know, umm, but if we really comfortable, umm, I won't uh, to buy it because I don't care about the fashionable thing.

✓ MMM, I think comfortable shoes are more important for me because although the shoes are really fashionable and really eye-catching, if they are not really comfortable, I won't buy them because I don't care about fashionable things.

'shoes'是复数，动词应用复数形式'are'。'really highlights'用法错误，应改为'really eye-catching'或类似表达。'if we really comfortable'缺少动词，应改为'if they are not really comfortable'。'to buy it'中不需要不定式'to'，应为'buy them'。