Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by making it more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'buy shoes' multiple times. Also, use correct plural forms and improve sentence structure for better flow.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes and sandals for both daily wear and special occasions. I usually purchase new pairs every six months to suit my college and work needs.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be more complete and grammatically correct. Avoid incomplete sentences and improve clarity by using proper sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I bought shoes online once, about two or three years ago. I purchased a pair of Skechers sneakers from Amazon for college, and I found them very comfortable and stylish.

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more direct and grammatically correct. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'how much money shall I spend'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

Ví dụ: The amount I spend on shoes varies depending on my preferences and comfort. Generally, I spend around $30 to $40 every six months on new shoes.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and making sentences more concise. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because my internship involves long hospital shifts. Wearing comfortable shoes helps me stay active and focused throughout the day.

× Yes, I'm very fond of buying shoes and different kind of sandals for my daily wear and also one for special occasions.

✓ Yes, I'm very fond of buying shoes and different kinds of sandals for my daily wear and also one for special occasions.

The phrase 'different kind of sandals' should be 'different kinds of sandals' because 'different' implies multiple types, so the plural form 'kinds' is required to match the plural noun 'sandals'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× I usually buy it for my daily routine for my college and job purpose.

✓ I usually buy them for my daily routine for my college and job purposes.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'shoes', which is plural, so it should be 'them'. Also, 'purpose' should be plural 'purposes' because it refers to more than one reason (college and job). This is a singular and plural issue.

× Yes, I have bought online shoes once.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online once.

The phrase 'online shoes' is awkward; the correct word order is 'shoes online'. Also, the sentence is in present perfect tense which is correct, but the word order needs correction for natural English.

× I think it was two to three years ago when I bought one sneakers of Skechers company from Amazon.

✓ I think it was two to three years ago when I bought a pair of sneakers from Skechers company on Amazon.

The word 'one' cannot be used with 'sneakers' because 'sneakers' is plural. The correct expression is 'a pair of sneakers'. Also, 'from Amazon' is better as 'on Amazon' when referring to an online platform. This is a singular and plural issue and preposition usage issue.

× I bought it for my college purpose.

✓ I bought it for my college purposes.

The phrase 'college purpose' is better expressed as 'college purposes' to indicate reasons related to college. Also, 'purpose' is countable here and plural is more appropriate. This is a quantifier and preposition usage issue.

× I found it very nice and comfortable and I really.

✓ I found it very nice and comfortable, and I really liked it.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb after 'I really'. Adding 'liked it' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct. This is a sentence structure error.

× Well, it is not fixed that how much money shall I spend on shoes, but it depends on my hobby, It depends on my comfort as well as my availability.

✓ Well, it is not fixed how much money I should spend on shoes; it depends on my hobby, my comfort, as well as my availability.

The modal verb 'shall' is incorrectly used in a question form within a statement. The correct modal verb here is 'should' in a statement. Also, the sentence structure is improved by removing 'that' and correcting punctuation. This is a modal verb usage and sentence structure error.

× I usually spends 30 to $40 every six months for my shoes.

✓ I usually spend 30 to 40 dollars every six months on my shoes.

The verb 'spends' does not agree with the subject 'I', which requires 'spend'. Also, '$40' should be written as '40 dollars' for clarity, and the preposition 'on' is more appropriate than 'for' in this context. This is a subject-verb agreement and preposition usage issue.

× I usually prefer comfortable shoes because since my internship have started I used to be very busy for my hospitals and daily shifts so I really prefer wearing a comfortable shoes which makes my day easier and more useful.

✓ I usually prefer comfortable shoes because since my internship started, I have been very busy with my hospital duties and daily shifts, so I really prefer wearing comfortable shoes which make my day easier and more productive.

The preposition 'for my hospitals' is incorrect; it should be 'with my hospital duties'. Also, 'have started' should be 'started' or 'have been' depending on tense consistency. 'A comfortable shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural, so 'comfortable shoes' without 'a' is correct. 'Makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural 'shoes'. 'More useful' is better expressed as 'more productive'. This sentence has multiple issues including preposition use, tense, article use, and subject-verb agreement.