Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Thí sinh
No, I don't. Maybe I buy shoes once in six months. I didn't like to wear a lot of shoes because I think sometimes durable shoes is enough for me to wear comfortably.
Giám khảo
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have. Sometimes I do not have enough time to go to the shop and buy the shoes, so I prefer to buy the shoes online. But I think sometimes the shoes are not very suitable for me, so I need to turn the them back.
Giám khảo
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Thí sinh
Umm, I think maybe about 500 to 800. I'm not a person who, uh, need to pay a lot of money on the shoes. I think, uh, this mount is enough for me to have a durable shoes and it's not very expensive.
Giám khảo
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Thí sinh
I prefer comfortable shoes during my daily life. I I like to do a lot of running to keep fit. So I need a durable shoes to help me run a lot. I think fashionable shoes is not fit for me.
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Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如时态和单复数形式，且表达不够自然。建议注意时态一致性，使用更地道的表达方式，并避免重复。
Ví dụ: No, I don't like buying shoes very often. I usually buy a pair every six months because I prefer durable shoes that are comfortable to wear.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较完整，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“turn the them back”。建议注意代词使用和句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have. Sometimes I don't have enough time to go to the store, so I prefer buying shoes online. However, sometimes the shoes don't fit well, so I have to return them.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和发音停顿过多，且数字单位不明确。建议减少语气词，明确货币单位，注意单复数和冠词使用。
Ví dụ: I usually spend about 500 to 800 yuan on shoes. I'm not someone who spends a lot of money on shoes, but this amount is enough for me to buy durable and affordable shoes.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，如冠词使用不当。建议避免重复，注意单复数和动词形式，使表达更准确自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes in my daily life because I like running to stay fit. Therefore, I need durable shoes that support my running. Fashionable shoes don't suit my needs.
Ngữ pháp
× I didn't like to wear a lot of shoes because I think sometimes durable shoes is enough for me to wear comfortably.
✓ I don't like to wear a lot of shoes because I think sometimes durable shoes are enough for me to wear comfortably.
这里使用了过去时态'didn't like'，但句子表达的是现在的习惯，应使用一般现在时'don't like'。另外，主语'shoes'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'。
× sometimes durable shoes is enough for me to wear comfortably.
✓ sometimes durable shoes are enough for me to wear comfortably.
'shoes'是复数名词，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'，而不是单数'is'。
× so I need to turn the them back.
✓ so I need to return them back.
'turn the them back'中'the'多余且错误，应去掉，且表达退货应使用'return'更合适。
× this mount is enough for me to have a durable shoes and it's not very expensive.
✓ this amount is enough for me to have durable shoes and it's not very expensive.
'shoes'是复数，前面不应加不定冠词'a'。另外，'mount'应为'amount'。
× I need a durable shoes to help me run a lot.
✓ I need durable shoes to help me run a lot.
'shoes'是复数，前面不应加不定冠词'a'。
× I think fashionable shoes is not fit for me.
✓ I think fashionable shoes are not fit for me.
'shoes'是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'。
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