Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some confusion between 'suits' and 'shoes'. Try to respond directly and clearly to the question, avoid filler words like 'uh', and keep your answer concise and relevant. Also, provide specific details about your shoe buying habits using linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, but I don't do it very often. The last time I bought a pair was about two years ago when I was in grade 18. I prefer shoes that have a whitish color on the outside because they look clean and stylish.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and repetitive, and you confuse 'suit' with 'shoes'. Try to answer directly, avoid repetition and filler words, and use linking words to explain your experience clearly and logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online once. However, I had a bad experience because the delivery driver kept coming to the wrong address, even though I provided the correct location. This made the process frustrating.

Gợi ý: Your answer contains many filler words and some unclear phrases like 'chill wife's type of shoe'. Try to be more precise and avoid fillers. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide clear, specific details about your spending and preferences.

Ví dụ: I haven't bought new shoes in about two years. Usually, I spend around 4,000 to 5,000 Nepalese rupees on a pair. I prefer to buy comfortable shoes that suit my style and daily activities.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and incomplete. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples. Avoid repeating the same words and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because I spend a lot of time walking. For example, I usually choose shoes with good cushioning and support, even if they are not the latest style.

× I like to buy new suits and order them.

✓ I like to buy new shoes and order them.

The word 'suits' is incorrect in this context because the question is about shoes. The correct plural noun should be 'shoes' to match the topic.

× I like the shoe with whitish color in the outer part of the shoe.

✓ I like shoes with a whitish color on the outer part.

The sentence incorrectly uses singular 'shoe' when referring generally. Using plural 'shoes' and adding 'a' before 'whitish color' makes the sentence grammatically correct and natural.

× I bought a suit uh one uh Yep, I got a suit one time uh it was a online transaction uh.

✓ I bought a shoe one time; it was an online transaction.

The word 'suit' is incorrect here; it should be 'shoe' to match the context. Also, 'a online' should be 'an online' due to vowel sound at the start of 'online'.

× The driver kept coming to the wrong location and although I have put my right uh correct location and it was.

✓ The driver kept coming to the wrong location even though I had put my correct location.

The phrase 'although I have put' is awkward; 'even though I had put' is more appropriate. Also, 'my right correct location' is redundant; 'my correct location' suffices.

× Usually I uh, spend around 4 to 5000 and Nepalese rupees on my shoe

✓ Usually I spend around 4,000 to 5,000 Nepalese rupees on my shoes.

The amount should be '4,000 to 5,000' for clarity. Also, 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' because it refers to multiple or general footwear.

× I like to bike uh, buy a comfortable and uh, chill wife's type of shoe, which can match me up.

✓ I like to buy comfortable and casual types of shoes that match me.

The phrase 'bike uh, buy' is incorrect; 'like to buy' is correct. 'Chill wife's type of shoe' is unclear and likely a mishearing; 'casual types of shoes' is more appropriate. 'Match me up' should be 'match me'.

× For me, it's all about a comfortable and I've always been buying comfortable, comfortable shoe and clothes.

✓ For me, it's all about comfort, and I've always been buying comfortable shoes and clothes.

'A comfortable' is incomplete; it should be 'comfort'. Also, 'comfortable, comfortable shoe' is repetitive and 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' to match 'clothes'.

× The clothes, I think for me, uh, I like to go with the comfortable one and.

✓ As for clothes, I like to go with comfortable ones.

'The clothes' is awkward; 'As for clothes' is better. 'The comfortable one' should be plural 'comfortable ones' to refer to clothes in general.