Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and redundant phrases such as 'and yes'. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like buying shoes and usually purchase them once or twice a year. I prefer leather shoes because they are more durable and stylish compared to sneakers or sports shoes.

Gợi ý: Focus on using correct grammar and clearer expressions. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Avoid awkward phrases like 'fill it in my feet' and 'check it visually of apprehensions'.

Ví dụ: No, I have never bought shoes online because I prefer to try them on in the store to ensure they fit well and to check the quality carefully.

Gợi ý: Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid grammatical errors like 'I puts'.

Ví dụ: I usually spend between 100 to 200 dollars on high-quality leather shoes from local brands in my country.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly. Avoid unclear phrases like 'not resting chairs'.

Ví dụ: I prefer shoes that are well-made and durable, lasting two or three years. Therefore, I usually buy leather shoes instead of fabric ones because they last longer.

× No I don't. I rather to wear the shoes in shop physically and fill it in my feet and also checking the quality of production and check it visually of apprehensions of the shoe.

✓ No, I don't. I prefer to try the shoes on physically in the shop, feel them on my feet, and also check the quality of the product visually and inspect the shoe carefully.

The original sentence uses 'rather to wear' which is incorrect; the correct expression is 'prefer to' followed by the base verb. Also, 'fill it in my feet' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'feel them on my feet'. Additionally, 'checking' should be parallel with other verbs, so 'check' is used. The phrase 'check it visually of apprehensions of the shoe' is unclear and corrected to 'check the quality of the product visually and inspect the shoe carefully' for clarity and correctness.

× I puts something like that for my shoes.

✓ I put something like that for my shoes.

The verb 'puts' is incorrect here because the subject 'I' requires the base form 'put' in present tense. 'Puts' is used with third person singular subjects. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.

× I rather the shoes that have good production quality and age a lot, like 2 years or three years.

✓ I prefer shoes that have good production quality and last a long time, like 2 or 3 years.

The phrase 'I rather the shoes' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'I prefer shoes'. Also, 'age a lot' is awkward; 'last a long time' is more appropriate. The preposition 'like' is used correctly here to give examples.

× I can wear them and I because of that I'd rather to buy leather shoes, not resting chairs or fabric shoes.

✓ I can wear them, and because of that, I'd rather buy leather shoes, not resting chairs or fabric shoes.

The phrase 'I'd rather to buy' is incorrect; 'rather' is followed directly by the base verb without 'to'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding commas for clarity. The phrase 'resting chairs' seems incorrect in context; possibly 'running shoes' or 'casual shoes' was intended, but since it's not a grammar issue, it is left as is.