Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇错误（pills应为shoes），表达不够自然且有语法错误。建议使用更准确的词汇，简洁明了地表达观点，并避免重复。

Ví dụ: I don't usually like buying shoes because I think a few pairs are enough to match my outfits. I usually buy a new pair once a year or even less frequently.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如冠词使用错误和重复词。建议注意语法准确性，使用连贯的句子表达具体细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I bought a pair of coral leather shoes on Taobao a few weeks ago. However, I was not satisfied with the quality because they were not breathable, so I returned them.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较丰富，但表达不够流畅，句子结构复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，明确表达价格范围和个人预算。

Ví dụ: It depends on the purpose of the shoes. Usually, I spend between 100 and a few thousand yuan, but I avoid very expensive or luxury shoes because they are beyond my budget.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的句型，清楚表达偏好并给出具体原因。

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I often do activities like hiking and dancing. Comfortable shoes help me perform better and enjoy these activities more.

× Honestly I never show any interest in buying pills because I always think a view of rules is enough for me to to match my outfit.

✓ Honestly I never show any interest in buying shoes because I always think a few pairs of shoes are enough for me to match my outfit.

这里“pills”应为“shoes”，且“a view of rules”应为“a few pairs”，因为“pairs”是复数形式，表示多双鞋。单复数错误导致表达不准确。建议注意名词的单复数形式，尤其是可数名词。

× Maybe one year for one pair of shoes or even longer.

✓ Maybe one year for one pair of shoes or even longer.

该句无明显单复数错误，保持原句。

× Yes, several weeks ago I bought a coral leather shoes on an online app which is called Taobao.

✓ Yes, several weeks ago I bought a pair of coral leather shoes on an online app called Taobao.

“shoes”是复数，前面应加“a pair of”表示“一双鞋”，否则单复数不匹配。建议学习固定搭配“a pair of shoes”。

× But I'm not very satisfied with its quality as it it was no breathable.

✓ But I'm not very satisfied with its quality as it was not breathable.

“no breathable”应改为“not breathable”，因为“breathable”是形容词，否定时用“not”而非“no”。建议注意形容词的否定形式。

× So I returned it back and I decided to buy shoes.

✓ So I returned it and decided to buy shoes.

“returned”已经包含“回”的意思，后面加“back”是多余的。建议避免重复使用表示相同意思的词。

× Actually, I can accept almost average price on the market for shoes today from about 100 to several thousand, but the price can't be too expensive and luxury in that case, I can't afford that.

✓ Actually, I can accept an average price on the market for shoes today from about 100 to several thousand, but the price can't be too expensive or luxurious; in that case, I can't afford it.

“almost average price”应为“an average price”，“luxury”应为形容词“luxurious”，且连接词用“or”更合适。建议注意量词和形容词的正确使用。

× I definitely a fan of comfortable shoes because I like doing regular exercise like excursion and dancing.

✓ I am definitely a fan of comfortable shoes because I like doing regular exercise like hiking and dancing.

句中缺少动词“am”，且“excursion”用作运动不合适，改为“hiking”更自然。建议注意句子结构完整和词汇搭配。

× So uh, we are in comfortable shoes can help me doing sports very well and enjoy a more comfortable life.

✓ So, wearing comfortable shoes can help me do sports very well and enjoy a more comfortable life.

“we are in comfortable shoes”结构不正确，应改为“wearing comfortable shoes”；“help me doing”应为“help me do”。建议注意主语和动词形式的搭配。