Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然，语法和表达存在较多错误，且内容不够连贯。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用简单明了的句子表达购买鞋子的频率和原因。

Ví dụ: I don't buy shoes very often. Usually, I only buy new shoes when my old ones are worn out or when the weather changes and I need different shoes.

Gợi ý: 回答较为直接，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如"want out"应为"worn out"，"very convenience"应为"very convenient"。建议注意时态和词汇的正确使用，并尝试使用连接词使回答更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I bought a pair of sneakers online last week because my old ones were worn out. It was very convenient to shop online, and I received the shoes quickly.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不清楚，价格范围不明确，且语法错误较多。建议明确价格范围，使用正确的表达方式，并补充一些具体细节。

Ví dụ: I usually spend between 50 and 150 dollars on shoes. I prefer affordable shoes that are still comfortable and durable.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构重复且有语法错误。建议简化句子，避免重复，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer shoes that are both comfortable and fashionable. However, if I have to choose, I would pick comfort because comfortable shoes suit me better and are more practical.

× I if my shoes I have already have broken or something happening like decision cha changes the weather getting colder and colder, I will get a shoes at that time.

✓ If my shoes are already broken or something happens like the weather getting colder and colder, I will get shoes at that time.

句子中“if”条件句结构不完整，且“I have already have broken”重复且时态错误，应改为“are already broken”。“a shoes”中“shoes”是复数，不能用不定冠词“a”。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的条件句形式。

× I if my shoes I have already have broken or something happening like decision cha changes the weather getting colder and colder, I will get a shoes at that time.

✓ If my shoes are already broken or something happens like the weather getting colder and colder, I will get shoes at that time.

“a shoes”错误，shoes是复数名词，不能用不定冠词“a”，应去掉“a”。

× just a week ago I bought a new shoes online.

✓ Just a week ago I bought new shoes online.

“a new shoes”中“shoes”为复数，不能用不定冠词“a”，应去掉“a”。

× I bought them because my old ones already want out.

✓ I bought them because my old ones already wore out.

“want out”应为“wore out”，且“old ones”复数用法正确。

× It's very convenience.

✓ It's very convenient.

“convenience”是名词，句中需要形容词“convenient”来修饰“it”。

× I have a prices between 50 to 350.

✓ I have prices between 50 and 350.

“a prices”错误，prices为复数名词，不能用不定冠词“a”。“between”后应使用“and”连接两个数值。

× I have a prices between 50 to 350.

✓ I usually spend between 50 and 350 on shoes.

句子表达不清，建议改为“I usually spend between 50 and 350 on shoes.”更符合习惯表达。

× If I can, I want a pair of shoes both comfortable and fashionable, but if I have to choose one, I would choose the comfortable one because I can save a lot of money from my from my choices and also a comfortable one suit me better.

✓ If I can, I want a pair of shoes that are both comfortable and fashionable, but if I have to choose one, I would choose the comfortable one because I can save a lot of money from my choices and also a comfortable one suits me better.

“both comfortable and fashionable”前应加关系代词“that are”使句子完整。“a comfortable one suit me better”中主谓不一致，应为“suits”。“from my from my choices”重复，应去掉一个“from my”。