Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors, such as 'I for example' and 'a comfortable shoes'. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you could say when you buy shoes and why, then give a specific example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes because they help me express my personal style. I usually buy them during sales to save money. For example, I recently purchased a comfortable pair that I wore to my grandparents' party.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'purchasing A runny shoes' and 'good quality of soul'. Try to use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times because it offers a wide variety of sizes and styles. Moreover, international websites often provide better prices and good quality soles.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains errors in numbers and grammar. Be precise with amounts and avoid contradictory statements. Also, separate your ideas clearly and use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: I usually spend around $200 to $300 on shoes because I believe spending too much is unnecessary. I prefer buying online since there is a wide selection of sizes and styles.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good points but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing like 'doing taking anywhere' and 'suitable for the every weather conditions'. Try to use clear and correct sentences and add linking words to connect your ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because they are easy to wear and keep me comfortable while walking anywhere. Additionally, they are suitable for all weather conditions and easier to find than fashionable shoes.

× I usually give preference to buy shoes when they are on a sale.

✓ I usually give preference to buying shoes when they are on sale.

The verb 'give preference to' should be followed by a gerund (-ing form) rather than the base form 'buy'. Also, 'on a sale' is incorrect; it should be 'on sale' without the article.

× I for example I recently purchased a comfortable shoes which I wore on my grandparents party.

✓ For example, I recently purchased comfortable shoes which I wore to my grandparents' party.

The word 'shoes' is plural, so 'a comfortable shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'comfortable shoes' without 'a'. Also, 'grandparents party' needs a possessive apostrophe as 'grandparents' party'. The preposition 'on' should be 'to' when referring to attending a party.

× The reason behind is that because online I can get a lot of variety along with the different sizes and the different styles.

✓ The reason is that online I can get a lot of variety along with different sizes and styles.

The phrase 'The reason behind is that because' is redundant and incorrect. It should be simplified to 'The reason is that'. Also, 'the different sizes and the different styles' is better expressed without 'the' as 'different sizes and styles'.

× In addition to this, purchasing A runny shoes from my international websites offer me a best price at with a good quality of soul.

✓ In addition to this, purchasing running shoes from international websites offers me the best price with good quality soles.

The phrase 'A runny shoes' is incorrect; it should be 'running shoes' (adjective form). 'Offer' should be 'offers' to agree with singular subject 'purchasing'. 'A best price' should be 'the best price'. 'Soul' is a misspelling of 'sole' (part of a shoe). Also, 'my international websites' is better as 'international websites'.

× I usually spend 2 to $3000 on a shoes because I think that spending it too much money on a shoes is a waste of the money and I usually buy the shoes from the online market because they have a lot of choice and the different sizes in a different shape.

✓ I usually spend $200 to $300 on shoes because I think spending too much money on shoes is a waste, and I usually buy shoes from the online market because they have a lot of choices and different sizes and shapes.

'2 to $3000' is unclear and likely meant to be '$200 to $300'. 'A shoes' is incorrect; 'shoes' is plural and does not take 'a'. 'A lot of choice' should be 'a lot of choices' or 'a lot of variety'. 'The different sizes in a different shape' should be 'different sizes and shapes'.

× I feel comfortable while walking and doing taking anywhere.

✓ I feel comfortable while walking and doing tasks anywhere.

The phrase 'doing taking' is incorrect and unclear. It should be replaced with a proper verb phrase such as 'doing tasks' or 'going anywhere' depending on intended meaning.

× In addition to this, they are suitable for the every weather conditions and in and they are easy to purchase as compared to other.

✓ In addition to this, they are suitable for every weather condition and are easier to purchase compared to others.

'The every weather conditions' is incorrect; 'every' does not take 'the' and 'conditions' should be singular as 'condition' after 'every'. 'In and they are easy to purchase as compared to other' is awkward; it should be 'and are easier to purchase compared to others'.