Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors, such as singular/plural agreement.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes quite often because I need comfortable footwear for walking to work. For example, I usually buy Nike shoes since they are sporty and provide great comfort, which is essential as I don't own a car.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more organized. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details. Also, try to avoid filler phrases like 'I don't really know' and focus on clear explanations.

Ví dụ: Yes, I recently bought shoes from Puma's online store. However, it was a bad experience because my shoe size varies between 7 and 7.5 depending on the brand. I ordered size 7, but the shoes were too tight, and unfortunately, I didn't have time to return them.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but can be improved by removing fillers and structuring your response with a clear topic sentence followed by specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I enjoy buying shoes, but I don't spend a lot because I have other responsibilities. Usually, I spend up to 100 dollars on shoes, sometimes up to 110, but never more than that.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Avoid unclear phrases like 'hash ****** shoes'. Start with a direct answer, then explain with specific reasons using linking words. Also, check sentence structure and verb agreement.

Ví dụ: I always prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because I walk a lot during the day. Since I work long hours and enjoy walking, comfort is my top priority when choosing shoes.

× I must have a comfortable shoes so I always buy Nike for that.

✓ I must have comfortable shoes so I always buy Nike for that.

The word 'shoes' is plural, so it should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Removing 'a' corrects the singular/plural mismatch.

× I remember lately I bought shoes from online Puma website but that was not my good experience because I don't really know.

✓ I remember recently I bought shoes from the online Puma website but that was not a good experience because I don't really know.

The adverb 'lately' is better replaced with 'recently' for clarity. The phrase 'from online Puma website' needs the definite article 'the' before 'online Puma website'. Also, 'not my good experience' is incorrect; it should be 'not a good experience'.

× I bought 7 but it was so tight on me and I didn't have the time to return it.

✓ I bought size 7 but it was so tight on me and I didn't have the time to return it.

The number '7' alone is unclear; adding 'size' clarifies the meaning. This is not a grammar error per se but improves clarity.

× I usually spend maximum 100 on my shoes.

✓ I usually spend a maximum of 100 on my shoes.

The phrase 'maximum 100' is incorrect; it should be 'a maximum of 100' to correctly express the limit.

× I always prefer wearing comfortable shoes over the hash ****** shoes because I need to.

✓ I always prefer wearing comfortable shoes over the harsh shoes because I need to.

The word 'hash' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'harsh'. Also, the censored word is assumed to be 'harsh' to make sense in context.

× I walk a lot in the day as I work maximum hour in a day regularly because I love to walk so it's comfortable shoes is my choice.

✓ I walk a lot during the day as I regularly work maximum hours because I love to walk, so comfortable shoes are my choice.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'in the day' should be 'during the day'; 'maximum hour' should be 'maximum hours'; 'it's comfortable shoes is my choice' is incorrect subject-verb agreement and structure; corrected to 'comfortable shoes are my choice'.