Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Votre réponse est naturelle et claire, mais vous pouvez améliorer la cohérence en utilisant des mots de liaison pour relier vos idées, par exemple en expliquant d'abord pourquoi vous aimez acheter des chaussures, puis en précisant la fréquence et les occasions. Essayez aussi d'éviter les répétitions comme "because" et "especially" en début de phrases.

Ví dụ: I enjoy buying shoes because they help me express my personal style. Moreover, I usually purchase new pairs every few months, particularly during sales or when I need specific shoes for work or special occasions.

Gợi ý: Votre réponse est compréhensible mais contient des erreurs grammaticales et des expressions maladroites, comme "personal stuffs" et "try it before I actually buy it". En français, vous devriez vous concentrer sur l'utilisation correcte des noms non comptables et des structures conditionnelles. De plus, utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre la réponse plus fluide.

Ví dụ: No, I have never bought shoes online because I consider shoes very personal items. Therefore, I prefer to try them on in physical stores before making a purchase, as online shops do not offer this possibility.

Gợi ý: Votre réponse manque de clarté et contient des erreurs grammaticales, notamment dans l'expression des quantités et la structure des phrases. En français, travaillez sur la précision des chiffres et la cohérence des phrases. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour organiser vos idées et évitez les répétitions comme "I guess" et "I don't really".

Ví dụ: I usually spend around a few hundred dollars on each pair of shoes. Although I don't keep track of my total spending, I tend to compare prices carefully before buying to save money.

Gợi ý: Votre réponse est un peu confuse et contient des erreurs grammaticales et de formulation. En français, concentrez-vous sur la clarté et la structure logique de vos phrases. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour exprimer vos préférences clairement et évitez les phrases incomplètes ou mal construites.

Ví dụ: For me, shoes are essential for daily life, especially since I often walk long distances. Therefore, I generally prioritize comfort over style. However, I still like fashionable shoes, but only if they are comfortable enough, unlike high heels.

× For me shoes are very personal stuffs that I would like to try it before I actually buy it.

✓ For me, shoes are very personal stuff that I would like to try before I actually buy them.

The word 'stuffs' is incorrect because 'stuff' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Also, 'it' should be replaced with 'them' to agree with the plural noun 'shoes'.

× For me shoes are very personal stuffs that I would like to try it before I actually buy it.

✓ For me, shoes are very personal stuff that I would like to try before I actually buy them.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'shoes', which is plural. The correct pronoun is 'them' to match the plural noun.

× So online shops cannot offer this kind of service for me and I prefer to buy new shoes at physical stores.

✓ So online shops cannot offer this kind of service to me and I prefer to buy new shoes at physical stores.

The preposition 'for' is incorrect in this context; 'offer service to someone' is the correct collocation.

× I would say around a few, 100 for each shoes I guess I don't really calculate how much I spend in total, but I don't really spend much money on it and I tend to compare the prices before I buy it so I can save more money.

✓ I would say around a few hundred for each pair of shoes. I guess I don't really calculate how much I spend in total, but I don't really spend much money on them and I tend to compare the prices before I buy so I can save more money.

The phrase 'each shoes' is incorrect because 'shoes' is plural; it should be 'each pair of shoes'. Also, 'it' should be replaced with 'them' to refer to 'shoes'.

× I would say around a few, 100 for each shoes I guess I don't really calculate how much I spend in total, but I don't really spend much money on it and I tend to compare the prices before I buy it so I can save more money.

✓ I would say around a few hundred for each pair of shoes. I guess I don't really calculate how much I spend in total, but I don't really spend much money on them and I tend to compare the prices before I buy so I can save more money.

The pronouns 'it' are incorrectly used to refer to 'shoes', which is plural. The correct pronoun is 'them'. Also, 'buy it' is better as 'buy' without 'it'.

× For me, shoes are something essential in my daily life and I have to wear it to walk for a long distance, so I would prioritize its comfort over the style in general from of course for myself I still pref.

✓ For me, shoes are something essential in my daily life and I have to wear them to walk long distances, so I would prioritize their comfort over style in general. Of course, for myself, I still prefer...

The sentence has incorrect conjunctions and awkward phrasing. 'And I have to wear it' should be 'wear them' to agree with plural 'shoes'. 'Walk for a long distance' is better as 'walk long distances'. The phrase 'from of course for myself I still pref' is unclear and needs restructuring.

× For me, shoes are something essential in my daily life and I have to wear it to walk for a long distance, so I would prioritize its comfort over the style in general from of course for myself I still pref.

✓ For me, shoes are something essential in my daily life and I have to wear them to walk long distances, so I would prioritize their comfort over style in general. Of course, for myself, I still prefer...

The pronouns 'it' and 'its' are incorrectly used to refer to 'shoes', which is plural. They should be 'them' and 'their' respectively.