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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like buying shoes? How often?

Thí sinh

No, I don't, because I'm not interested in shoes very much. Therefore I buy shoes about once a year. If I if the shoes broken, I.

Giám khảo

Have you ever bought shoes online?

Thí sinh

No I haven't. I usually buy shoes at shops because the size I don't know what size is fit to me. I want to check it.

Giám khảo

How much money do you usually spend on shoes?

Thí sinh

I've never paid attention to it, but I spend about one ¥10,000. I don't know it is. Expensive or not?

Giám khảo

Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?

Thí sinh

I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable suits because. I want to wear the shoes longer so and it is more.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you like buying shoes? How often?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答が途中で終わっており、文法的な誤りもあります。より自然で効果的な回答にするために、質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べ、文を完結させることが重要です。例えば、"I don't like buying shoes very much because I'm not interested in them. Therefore, I usually buy shoes only once a year, when my old ones are broken."のようにすると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: I don't like buying shoes very much because I'm not interested in them. Therefore, I usually buy shoes only once a year, when my old ones are broken.

Have you ever bought shoes online?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 理由を述べる際に、文法的な誤りがあり、文章が少し不自然です。より自然な英語にするために、理由を明確にし、接続詞を使って文をつなげると良いでしょう。例えば、"No, I haven't. I usually buy shoes in shops because I don't know which size fits me well, so I want to try them on."のように表現できます。

Ví dụ: No, I haven't. I usually buy shoes in shops because I don't know which size fits me well, so I want to try them on.

How much money do you usually spend on shoes?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 金額を述べる際の表現が不自然で、文が断片的です。より自然に答えるために、金額を明確にし、意見や感想を付け加えると良いでしょう。例えば、"I haven't really paid attention to it, but I usually spend about 10,000 yen on shoes. I'm not sure if that's expensive or not."のように言えます。

Ví dụ: I haven't really paid attention to it, but I usually spend about 10,000 yen on shoes. I'm not sure if that's expensive or not.

Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答が途中で終わっており、文法的な誤りもあります。理由を明確に述べ、文を完結させることが必要です。例えば、"I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable ones because I want to wear them for a long time and comfort is more important to me."のように表現すると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable ones because I want to wear them for a long time and comfort is more important to me.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× If I if the shoes broken, I.

If the shoes are broken, I replace them.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains a repetition ('If I if'). It also lacks a verb in the correct form. The corrected sentence completes the thought and uses the correct verb form 'are broken' to indicate the condition.

Present tense issue

× I usually buy shoes at shops because the size I don't know what size is fit to me.

I usually buy shoes at shops because I don't know what size fits me.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and verb form. 'I don't know what size is fit to me' should be 'I don't know what size fits me' to use the correct verb agreement and natural phrasing.

Sentence structure errors

× I want to check it.

I want to check the fit.

The pronoun 'it' is vague here. Specifying 'the fit' clarifies the meaning and improves sentence clarity.

Sentence structure errors

× I don't know it is. Expensive or not?

I don't know if it is expensive or not.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. Combining into one sentence with 'if' makes it grammatically correct and clear.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable suits because.

I prefer comfortable shoes to fashionable shoes because

The word 'suits' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'shoes' to match the topic. Also, the sentence was incomplete and is corrected to be complete.

Sentence structure errors

× I want to wear the shoes longer so and it is more.

I want to wear the shoes longer, so they are more comfortable.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. The correction completes the sentence and clarifies the reason for preferring comfortable shoes.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BrokenSmashed; Fractured; Inoperative; Flouted; Defeated
ComfortablePleasant; Cozy; Loose; Leisurely
ExpensiveCostly
FitSuitable; Healthy; Equip; Join; Match
InterestedAttentive; Concerned; Partisan
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