Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Thí sinh
Yes, I really like buying shoes because I often play basketball. I need a better suit to support my performance on the court, so I will change my shoes about two months.
Giám khảo
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Thí sinh
Yes, most of the time I bought shoes online because the price of the same shoes is cheaper than offline.
Giám khảo
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Thí sinh
About 500 to 700, I think this price of shoes can support the performance. If the price is more expensive, I don't think it will boost my performance.
Giám khảo
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Thí sinh
Comfortable shoes definitely, because as I said, the main reason of buying shoes for me is to support my performance on basketball court. Most of the time I won't buy a fashion shoes with very high price.
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Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达了喜欢买鞋的原因，但语言表达不够自然，且句子结构有些混乱。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意语法和句子连贯性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes because I play basketball regularly. I usually replace my basketball shoes every two months to ensure they support my performance on the court.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且内容明确，但时态使用不准确，且表达略显简单。建议注意时态一致性，并丰富句子结构。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually buy shoes online because they are often cheaper than in physical stores.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中数字表达不够清晰，且句子结构不够自然。建议明确货币单位，使用更自然的表达方式，并适当连接句子。
Ví dụ: I usually spend about 500 to 700 yuan on shoes because I believe this price range offers good performance. I don't think spending more would necessarily improve my performance.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构较为简单。建议注意冠词使用和句子流畅性。
Ví dụ: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because my main reason for buying shoes is to support my performance on the basketball court. I usually avoid buying fashionable shoes that are very expensive.
Ngữ pháp
× I will change my shoes about two months.
✓ I will change my shoes about every two months.
这里表示频率，应该用“about every two months”表示大约每两个月一次，而不是“about two months”。
× Yes, most of the time I bought shoes online because the price of the same shoes is cheaper than offline.
✓ Yes, most of the time I buy shoes online because the price of the same shoes is cheaper than offline.
这里描述的是习惯动作，应该用一般现在时“buy”，而不是过去时“bought”。
× the price of the same shoes is cheaper than offline.
✓ the price of the same shoes is cheaper than that offline.
比较时需要明确比较对象，应该加上“that”指代“the price”，使句子更完整。
× About 500 to 700, I think this price of shoes can support the performance.
✓ About 500 to 700, I think this price range for shoes can support the performance.
“this price of shoes”表达不准确，应该用“this price range for shoes”表示价格区间。
× If the price is more expensive, I don't think it will boost my performance.
✓ If the price is higher, I don't think it will boost my performance.
“more expensive”比较级用法不当，应该用“higher”来比较价格。
× Most of the time I won't buy a fashion shoes with very high price.
✓ Most of the time I won't buy fashionable shoes with a very high price.
“a fashion shoes”中“shoes”是复数，不能用不定冠词“a”，且“fashion”应改为形容词“fashionable”，并且“with very high price”前应加冠词“a”。
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