Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Thí sinh
I don't really enjoy buying shoes or clothes in general because I think it is a time consuming process and it stresses me out sometimes and therefore when I need a new pair I just go to the shop quickly, choose the right pair of shoes and go out as fast as possible. And this?
Giám khảo
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Thí sinh
Yes, I buy shoes online quite often. Initially it was a bit of a hit and miss process because I wasn't sure about the sizes and the styles. But nowadays it's fast and convenient and also I often get some discount and that makes the website only.
Giám khảo
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Thí sinh
I think I spend more money in shoes than most people because I try to to buy a expensive but durable ones in order to, to use it for at least two or three years. Uh. However, in the long run, I think I save money because, uh, I use it until my.
Giám khảo
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Thí sinh
I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because I spend most of my time at home working or exercising. For example, when I do some exercise I need a a pair of shoes like sneakers that give me support and relax. So.
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Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Tu respuesta es clara pero un poco larga y repetitiva. Intenta ser más conciso y directo, evitando redundancias y mejorando la fluidez. Por ejemplo, podrías dividir la respuesta en dos oraciones claras y usar conectores para que suene más natural.
Ví dụ: I don't enjoy buying shoes because it takes a lot of time and stresses me out. So, I usually go quickly to the store, pick a suitable pair, and leave as soon as possible.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Tu respuesta tiene buena estructura pero contiene errores y frases incompletas que afectan la claridad. Trata de usar conectores adecuados y completar tus ideas para que la respuesta sea más coherente y natural.
Ví dụ: Yes, I often buy shoes online. At first, it was difficult because I wasn't sure about sizes and styles, but now it's fast and convenient. Also, I usually get discounts, which makes online shopping even better.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Tu respuesta es confusa y contiene pausas y errores gramaticales. Debes practicar respuestas más claras y completas, evitando muletillas y terminando tus ideas para que el mensaje sea comprensible y fluido.
Ví dụ: I usually spend more money on shoes than most people because I prefer buying expensive but durable ones. This way, I can use them for two or three years, which saves me money in the long run.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Tu respuesta es buena pero termina de forma abrupta y contiene repeticiones. Intenta concluir tus ideas y usar vocabulario más variado para que la respuesta sea más completa y natural.
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes over fashionable ones because I spend most of my time at home working or exercising. For example, I need sneakers that provide support and comfort during exercise.
Ngữ pháp
× I think I spend more money in shoes than most people because I try to to buy a expensive but durable ones in order to, to use it for at least two or three years.
✓ I think I spend more money on shoes than most people because I try to buy expensive but durable ones in order to use them for at least two or three years.
The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'on' when talking about spending money. Also, 'a expensive' is incorrect because 'expensive' starts with a vowel sound and should be preceded by 'an'. Additionally, 'ones' is plural, so 'a' should be removed. The pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural 'ones'. The repeated 'to' is a typographical error and should be removed.
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