Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: No, I don't buy shoes very often because I don't like spending money on them. I usually wait until my old shoes are worn out before buying new ones.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较完整，但句子连接不够自然，且有语法错误。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，并注意时态和语法。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online, but it was a terrible experience because I thought they would fit my feet, but they were too small. I wanted to return them, but the seller said I couldn't.

Gợi ý: 回答中数字表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议明确数字范围，注意时态和主谓一致，使表达更准确。

Ví dụ: When I was young, I usually spent about 500 Taiwan dollars on shoes, but now I spend between 1000 and 2000 because I believe the quality of shoes is very important and reflects their price.

Gợi ý: 回答表达重复且语法不准确。建议简洁表达观点，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them every day, even to work. Although style is also important, comfort is my top priority.

× No, I usually don't buy shoes that often because I don't like spend money on that and I usually wait until it retired.

✓ No, I usually don't buy shoes that often because I don't like spending money on that and I usually wait until they are worn out.

动词后面接动名词形式（-ing）表示喜欢或不喜欢做某事，不能直接用动词原形。这里'don't like spend'应改为'don't like spending'。另外，'it retired'不符合语境，鞋子用复数，且应使用被动或形容词短语，改为'they are worn out'更合适。

× No, I usually don't buy shoes that often because I don't like spend money on that and I usually wait until it retired.

✓ No, I usually don't buy shoes that often because I don't like spending money on that and I usually wait until they are worn out.

句中'it retired'使用了错误的过去式，且主语应为复数'shoes'，应使用被动语态或形容词短语，正确表达为'they are worn out'。

× No, I usually don't buy shoes that often because I don't like spend money on that and I usually wait until it retired.

✓ No, I usually don't buy shoes that often because I don't like spending money on that and I usually wait until they are worn out.

'retired'作为过去分词在此处用法不当，鞋子不能用'retired'，应使用'worn out'表示磨损坏了。

× Yes, but it was a really terrible experience because I thought it would fit with my feet but actually not.

✓ Yes, but it was a really terrible experience because I thought it would fit my feet but actually it did not.

'fit with my feet'中'fit'后不需要介词'with'，应直接接宾语。'actually not'不完整，应补全为'actually it did not'。

× It's too small and I wanted to return it but they say I cannot.

✓ It's too small and I wanted to return it but they said I could not.

时态不一致，前句为过去时'wanted'，后句应使用过去时态'said'和'could not'，而非现在时'say'和'cannot'。

× I usually spend 500 Taiwan dollar when I was young, but now I would pay maybe 1000 between 2000 because I think the quality of the shoes is really important and also it reflect for the price.

✓ I usually spent 500 Taiwan dollars when I was young, but now I would pay maybe between 1000 and 2000 because I think the quality of the shoes is really important and also it reflects the price.

'Taiwan dollar'应为复数形式'Taiwan dollars'。

× I usually spend 500 Taiwan dollar when I was young, but now I would pay maybe 1000 between 2000 because I think the quality of the shoes is really important and also it reflect for the price.

✓ I usually spent 500 Taiwan dollars when I was young, but now I would pay maybe between 1000 and 2000 because I think the quality of the shoes is really important and also it reflects the price.

描述过去习惯应使用过去时态，'spend'应改为'spent'。

× I usually spend 500 Taiwan dollar when I was young, but now I would pay maybe 1000 between 2000 because I think the quality of the shoes is really important and also it reflect for the price.

✓ I usually spent 500 Taiwan dollars when I was young, but now I would pay maybe between 1000 and 2000 because I think the quality of the shoes is really important and also it reflects the price.

'between 2000'缺少前置词，应为'between 1000 and 2000'。另外，'reflect for the price'中'for'用法错误，应直接用'verbs'反映价格，改为'reflects the price'。

× I usually spend 500 Taiwan dollar when I was young, but now I would pay maybe 1000 between 2000 because I think the quality of the shoes is really important and also it reflect for the price.

✓ I usually spent 500 Taiwan dollars when I was young, but now I would pay maybe between 1000 and 2000 because I think the quality of the shoes is really important and also it reflects the price.

主语'it'为第三人称单数，谓语动词应加's'，'reflect'应改为'reflects'。

× Oh definitely is comfortable shoes because I need wearing this every day, like even I go to work.

✓ Oh, definitely comfortable shoes because I need to wear them every day, even when I go to work.

'need wearing'用法错误，'need'后应接动词不定式'to wear'。'this'指代鞋子应使用复数代词'them'。

× Oh definitely is comfortable shoes because I need wearing this every day, like even I go to work.

✓ Oh, definitely comfortable shoes because I need to wear them every day, even when I go to work.

'this'指代复数鞋子不正确，应使用复数代词'them'。

× So I think the comfortable the most important part.

✓ So I think comfort is the most important part.

'the comfortable the most important part'结构不正确，应将形容词改为名词'comfort'，使句子结构完整。

× I mean, yeah, sometimes the style also important.

✓ I mean, yeah, sometimes the style is also important.

缺少系动词'is'，形容词'important'前应有系动词。

× I wouldn't choose the style really bad, but for me comfortable is the most important.

✓ I wouldn't choose a style that is really bad, but for me, comfort is the most important.

'choose the style really bad'缺少关系代词和系动词，应改为'choose a style that is really bad'。'comfortable'应改为名词'comfort'。