Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ответ слишком длинный и содержит некоторые грамматические ошибки и нечеткости. Следует использовать более простые и четкие предложения, избегать лишних слов и структурировать ответ логично.

Ví dụ: I don't often buy shoes. Usually, I buy new ones only when my old shoes are worn out. My mom helps me choose shoes because she knows where to find good quality and affordable prices.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения, а также нечетко выражает мысль. Следует использовать правильные конструкции и избегать повторов, а также расширить ответ с помощью связующих слов.

Ví dụ: I find buying shoes online uncomfortable because it's hard to know the exact size. Therefore, I prefer buying shoes in physical stores where I can try them on before purchasing.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит много пауз и нечетких выражений. Следует говорить более уверенно, использовать правильные слова и более четко объяснять причины различий в цене.

Ví dụ: I usually spend more than $50 on new shoes, but the price depends on the material. For example, leather shoes are more expensive, while shoes made in China tend to be cheaper.

Gợi ý: Ответ понятен, но содержит некоторые грамматические ошибки и нечеткие выражения. Следует использовать более точные формулировки и избегать повторов, а также связать идеи более логично.

Ví dụ: When I was younger, I preferred fashionable shoes. However, now I realize that comfortable shoes are better because they allow me to walk easily and feel good. Therefore, I prefer comfort over fashion.

× In this that case my mom always helps me and we go to shopping together and I choose all my shoes only etc because they have good quality and affordable prices.

✓ In that case, my mom always helps me and we go shopping together, and I choose all my shoes there because they have good quality and affordable prices.

The phrase 'In this that case' is incorrect; it should be 'In that case'. The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping'. The word 'only etc' is unclear and unnecessary; replacing it with 'there' clarifies the meaning. Also, commas are needed to separate clauses for clarity.

× So I think buy shoes online, it's uncomfortable.

✓ So I think buying shoes online is uncomfortable.

The verb 'buy' should be in the gerund form 'buying' to function as the subject of the sentence. Also, the comma before 'it's uncomfortable' is unnecessary and should be removed.

× You don't know the exactly size of shoes.

✓ You don't know the exact size of the shoes.

The adverb 'exactly' is incorrectly used; the adjective 'exact' should be used to modify 'size'. Also, 'the shoes' is more appropriate than 'shoes' in this context.

× So that's why I prefer buying shoes in in real in real stories.

✓ So that's why I prefer buying shoes in real stores.

The phrase 'in in real in real stories' contains repetition and incorrect word choice. The correct phrase is 'in real stores'. 'Stories' is a mishearing or typo for 'stores'.

× So personally, I spent more than, uh, $50, uh, to buy new shoes, but it's exactly, it depends on what kind of material it was done.

✓ So personally, I spend more than $50 to buy new shoes, but it exactly depends on what kind of material it is made of.

The verb 'spent' is past tense, but the context suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'spend' is appropriate. The phrase 'it was done' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'it is made of' to describe the material.

× For instance, for laser, it will be much higher cost, but if it's like China's product, it will much cheaper I think.

✓ For instance, for leather, it will cost much more, but if it's a product from China, it will be much cheaper, I think.

'Laser' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'leather'. The phrase 'it will be much higher cost' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it will cost much more'. 'China's product' should be 'a product from China'. Also, 'it will much cheaper' is missing the verb 'be'.

× So I used to choose more fashionable choice when I was younger.

✓ So I used to choose more fashionable shoes when I was younger.

The phrase 'more fashionable choice' is incorrect because 'choice' is a noun and needs an article or to be replaced. Here, 'shoes' fits better as the object of 'choose'.

× But currently I understood that comfortable shoes are much better than fashionable shoes.

✓ But currently I understand that comfortable shoes are much better than fashionable shoes.

The verb 'understood' is past tense, but 'currently' indicates present tense, so 'understand' should be used.

× So I think comfortable shoes is best.

✓ So I think comfortable shoes are best.

The subject 'comfortable shoes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'.