Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to be more precise and avoid filler words like 'umm'. Also, clarify your examples and use correct verb forms. For instance, instead of 'I'll gonna save money', say 'I usually save money'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy buying shoes. Usually, I save money every month to buy a new pair, such as casual sneakers or elegant high heels. Buying shoes helps me relax and reduces my stress.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid vague phrases like 'in this area' without explanation. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and be more specific about your opinion.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online. Many people prefer online shopping because it saves time and money, especially when using vouchers. I find it convenient since I can shop without going to a physical store.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains repetition and some grammatical errors. Try to avoid filler words and repeat words. Use correct sentence structures and be more concise.

Ví dụ: The amount I spend depends on the type of shoes. For casual shoes, I usually spend around £40 to £50 per pair. If I have extra money, I buy high heels that cost about £100.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use plural forms correctly and improve sentence flow with linking words. Also, avoid repeating 'prefer' too closely.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because I walk and stand a lot during work. Comfortable shoes help reduce stress and keep my feet healthy, unlike high heels which can be painful after a long day.

× Usually every month I'll gonna save money to buy a new shoe, like a new sandwich or maybe a new high heel that is really umm.

✓ Usually every month I am going to save money to buy a new shoe, like a new sandal or maybe a new high heel that is really umm.

The phrase 'I'll gonna' is incorrect because 'I'll' (I will) and 'gonna' (going to) both express future tense and should not be combined. Use either 'I will' or 'I am going to'. Also, 'sandwich' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'sandal', a type of shoe.

× That's helped me a lot to relax and reduce stressed.

✓ That has helped me a lot to relax and reduce stress.

The word 'stressed' is an adjective, but here a noun 'stress' is needed to correctly express the idea of reducing the feeling of stress. Also, 'That's' should be 'That has' for clarity.

× Well that is interesting question.

✓ Well, that is an interesting question.

The sentence is missing the article 'an' before 'interesting question'. Also, a comma after 'Well' improves readability.

× So rather than buying true in the real shop they prefer buying a shoe online that's save money if you have a voucher or is save time when you don't have.

✓ So rather than buying shoes in a real shop, they prefer buying shoes online because that saves money if you have a voucher or saves time when you don't.

The phrase 'buying true in the real shop' is incorrect; it should be 'buying shoes in a real shop'. Also, 'that's save money' and 'is save time' are incorrect verb forms; they should be 'that saves money' and 'saves time'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Well is depend on what kind of shoe I spend on.

✓ Well, it depends on what kind of shoes I spend on.

The sentence lacks the subject 'it' and the verb should be in third person singular 'depends'. Also, 'shoe' should be plural 'shoes' to match the context.

× Most of the shoe I spend is about umm, casual casual umm, shoe.

✓ Most of the shoes I spend on are casual shoes.

'Shoe' should be plural 'shoes' because it refers to multiple items. Also, the verb should agree with the plural subject: 'are' instead of 'is'. The sentence is simplified for clarity.

× So it's about 40 to £50 per pair and if I have more money I'm gonna buy a high heel so it would be 100 for that.

✓ So it's about £40 to £50 per pair, and if I have more money, I'm going to buy high heels, so it would be £100 for that.

Use 'I'm going to' instead of 'I'm gonna' for formal correctness. Also, 'high heel' should be plural 'high heels' when referring to shoes in general. Currency symbol placement is corrected.

× I prefer a comfortable shoe because I walk, run and spend a lot of time on my shoe when I work so I prefer comfortable shoe to help me reduce stress and is make my feet better than wear high heel when I work all day.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because I walk, run, and spend a lot of time on my feet when I work, so I prefer comfortable shoes to help me reduce stress and to make my feet feel better than when I wear high heels all day at work.

'Shoe' should be plural 'shoes' to match the context. The phrase 'spend a lot of time on my shoe' is incorrect; it should be 'on my feet'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness, including verb forms and conjunctions.