Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Thí sinh
I like buying new shoes and usually I buy a new pair of shoes about about one time once a month.
Giám khảo
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Thí sinh
Yes, I remember things. I become, uh, an undergraduate. I buy shoes online and uh, before I, I tend to buy offline.
Giám khảo
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Thí sinh
I purchased them I I buy one pair for nearly CN¥200 and I think it is not very expensive to me because I choose some cheap shoes.
Giám khảo
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Thí sinh
I prefer comfortable shoes because they are, umm, valuable and, uh, I can wear them almost every day and it, uh, and, uh, those fashion shoes don't have that function and I don't need to buy the more of the.
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Part 1
Do you like buying shoes? How often?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇，表达不够简洁自然。建议避免重复，简洁明了地表达购买鞋子的频率。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy buying new shoes and usually purchase a pair once a month.
Have you ever bought shoes online?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议直接回答问题，并用连贯的句子说明线上和线下购买的经历。
Ví dụ: Yes, I started buying shoes online when I became an undergraduate. Before that, I usually bought shoes in physical stores.
How much money do you usually spend on shoes?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议简洁表达价格，并说明选择便宜鞋子的原因。
Ví dụ: I usually spend about CN¥200 on a pair of shoes, which I consider affordable because I prefer buying inexpensive ones.
Which do you prefer, fashionable shoes or comfortable shoes?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有过多的语气词，表达不清晰且句子结构混乱。建议清晰表达偏好并用连贯句子说明理由。
Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because they are practical and I can wear them almost every day, unlike fashionable shoes which are less functional.
Ngữ pháp
× I like buying new shoes and usually I buy a new pair of shoes about about one time once a month.
✓ I like buying new shoes and usually I buy a new pair of shoes about once a month.
句子中出现了重复的词“about about one time once”，属于多余重复，应删除多余部分使句子简洁。
× Yes, I remember things. I become, uh, an undergraduate. I buy shoes online and uh, before I, I tend to buy offline.
✓ Yes, I remember. When I became an undergraduate, I bought shoes online, and before that, I tended to buy offline.
描述过去的动作时，动词时态应使用过去式，如become应为became，buy应为bought，tend应为tended。
× I purchased them I I buy one pair for nearly CN¥200 and I think it is not very expensive to me because I choose some cheap shoes.
✓ I purchased them. I bought one pair for nearly CN¥200, and I think it is not very expensive for me because I choose some cheap shoes.
句中时态不一致，描述过去购买行为应使用过去式bought，且句子应分开以避免语法错误。
× I prefer comfortable shoes because they are, umm, valuable and, uh, I can wear them almost every day and it, uh, and, uh, those fashion shoes don't have that function and I don't need to buy the more of the.
✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because they are, umm, valuable and, uh, I can wear them almost every day, and, uh, those fashionable shoes don't have that function, so I don't need to buy more of them.
句中“the more of the”用法错误，应使用“more of them”来表示“更多的鞋子”，且fashion应改为形容词fashionable。
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