Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like buying shoes and usually buy a new pair once a month if I have enough money. For example, I often purchase basketball shoes because I play basketball regularly, and I find those shoes very comfortable and durable.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence, then explain why you buy shoes online using linking words. Use correct verb tenses and singular/plural forms.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online once because I have large feet, and it is hard to find my size in physical stores. Therefore, buying online was the only option, and I really liked the shoes I purchased.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains errors in vocabulary and sentence structure. State your spending amount clearly, then explain your opinion with linking words. Avoid confusing phrases and be specific.

Ví dụ: I usually spend between 500 and 800 dollars on shoes because I believe shoes are a necessity, but I don't think it's necessary to spend too much money on them.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Start with a clear preference, then explain your reason using linking words. Use correct sentence structures and vocabulary relevant to the context.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because, in my opinion, shoes are a necessity that helps us move easily. Therefore, comfort is more important to me than fashion when choosing shoes.

× Certainly, I often buy shoes a month if I have money, enough money for me to buy new shoes.

✓ Certainly, I often buy shoes every month if I have enough money to buy new shoes.

The phrase 'a month' should be preceded by 'every' to indicate frequency. Also, 'enough money for me to buy new shoes' is better expressed as 'enough money to buy new shoes' for conciseness and correctness.

× And I often buy some basketball shoes for me to play the basketball and those shoes are very pretty good.

✓ And I often buy some basketball shoes to play basketball, and those shoes are pretty good.

The phrase 'for me to play the basketball' is incorrect; 'to play basketball' is the correct expression. Also, 'very pretty good' is redundant; 'pretty good' suffices.

× I have bought shoes on I once and that shoes was incredibly pretty because my foot is very big and there's no size affordable offline so I only can buy shoes online and I love that shoes very much.

✓ I have bought shoes online once, and those shoes were incredibly good because my feet are very big and there is no size available offline, so I can only buy shoes online, and I love those shoes very much.

The phrase 'bought shoes on I once' is incorrect; it should be 'bought shoes online once'. 'That shoes' should be plural 'those shoes'. 'Was' should be 'were' to agree with plural 'shoes'. 'My foot is very big' should be plural 'my feet are very big'. 'No size affordable offline' is better expressed as 'no size available offline'. 'I only can buy' should be 'I can only buy' for correct adverb placement.

× I usually do not spend a lot of money on buying shoes for around 500 to $800 because I think shoes are a necessity, but it can also be a 1 so I do not need to spend a lot of money in there.

✓ I usually do not spend a lot of money on buying shoes, around $500 to $800, because I think shoes are a necessity, but they can also be a luxury, so I do not need to spend a lot of money on them.

The phrase 'for around 500 to $800' is awkward; 'around $500 to $800' is better. 'It can also be a 1' is unclear and likely a typo; 'they can also be a luxury' fits the context. 'Spend a lot of money in there' should be 'spend a lot of money on them' to refer correctly to shoes.

× I prefer buying comfortable shoes since shoes for my perspective are necessities.

✓ I prefer buying comfortable shoes since, from my perspective, shoes are necessities.

The phrase 'for my perspective' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'from my perspective'. Also, a comma is needed after 'since' for clarity.

× You wear shoes in order to make us to work more convenient.

✓ You wear shoes in order to make your work more convenient.

The phrase 'make us to work more convenient' is ungrammatical. It should be 'make your work more convenient' to correctly express the intended meaning.

× So buying shoes the comfortable is more important than how you.

✓ So buying comfortable shoes is more important than how they look.

The phrase 'buying shoes the comfortable' is incorrect; the adjective should precede the noun as 'comfortable shoes'. The phrase 'than how you' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'than how they look' to complete the comparison.