Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and use more natural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds (uh), correct vocabulary (comfort instead of comfortness), and limit to 3–4 sentences. Add a brief reason and example using linking words like "because" or "so."

Ví dụ: Yes, I like buying shoes, but only when I need them. I usually choose shoes for specific activities because durability and comfort matter most to me. For example, I buy running shoes for exercise and a sturdier pair for work.

Gợi ý: Make the answer more fluent and reduce repetition. Use linking words to structure your reason and give a short example. Replace awkward phrases ("in the hassle of returning") with natural alternatives like "risk of returns" and use singular/plural correctly.

Ví dụ: I rarely buy shoes online because I prefer to check the fit and quality in person to avoid returns. For instance, I try on shoes in a store to ensure they are comfortable before I pay.

Gợi ý: Give a clearer, more specific answer with estimated amount or frequency. Fix grammar ("mid-range", "quality"), remove repetition, and use linking words to explain preference. Keep to 2–3 sentences and include a short example or figure.

Ví dụ: I don't spend much on shoes; I usually buy mid-range pairs that cost about $50–$80 and replace them only when the old ones are worn out. I prefer quality over quantity, so I invest in a durable pair rather than buying many cheap ones.

Gợi ý: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence and two brief supporting sentences contrasting situations. Correct word choices ("comfort" not "consentment security"), fix grammar and subject-verb agreement, and use linking words like "however" or "when".

Ví dụ: I usually prefer comfortable shoes for work because they let me stay on my feet all day without pain. However, when I'm going out or attending events, I choose fashionable shoes that match my outfit and boost my confidence.

× they allow me to provide comfort for different kind of activities.

✓ they allow me to provide comfort for different kinds of activities.

The noun 'kind' should be plural ('kinds') when modified by 'different'. Also 'different kinds of activities' is the correct collocation. Use plural after 'different'. Suggestion: change 'different kind' to 'different kinds'.

× But uh, it depends on the durability and comfortness of the shoes.

✓ But, it depends on the durability and comfort of the shoes.

'Comfortness' is not a standard English word; the correct noun is 'comfort'. Replace the incorrect adjective-derived form with the noun 'comfort'.

× I prefer buying it when I need, when I think it is necessary for me to purchase that thing.

✓ I prefer buying them when I need to, when I think it is necessary for me to make the purchase.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'shoes' (plural), so use 'them'. Also 'purchase that thing' is awkward; use 'make the purchase' or 'buy them'. Add 'to' after 'need' for correct infinitive structure.

× Otherwise I stick to those who are.

✓ Otherwise I stick to the ones I already have.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear ('those who are' lacks a verb/complement). Replace with a clear noun phrase 'the ones I already have' to express keeping current shoes.

× I have purchased shoes online rarely because I feel like I should inspect the quality and durability of shoes before purchasing and I don't want to be in the hassle of returning the shoes if they don't feel fit well.

✓ I have rarely purchased shoes online because I feel I should inspect their quality and durability before buying, and I don't want the hassle of returning shoes if they don't fit well.

Adverb 'rarely' should come before the past participle in present perfect ('have rarely purchased'). Use 'their' to avoid repeating 'shoes'. 'Be in the hassle' is incorrect; say 'the hassle'. 'Don't feel fit well' should be 'don't fit well'. Also streamline 'purchasing' to 'buying'.

× So I like to purchase it on the physical store rather than purchasing in online store.

✓ So I prefer to buy them in physical stores rather than in online stores.

Use plural 'stores' and plural pronoun 'them' for shoes. Preposition 'in' is used with stores (or 'at' for specific store); 'on the physical store' is incorrect. Also parallel structure: 'in physical stores rather than online ones' or 'rather than in online stores'.

× So basically I do not invest that much on shoes as I prefer purchasing them only if the old ones are torn apart.

✓ So basically I do not spend that much on shoes because I prefer to buy them only when the old ones are worn out.

'Invest' is odd here; use 'spend'. Preposition 'on' is acceptable but 'spend on shoes' is standard. 'Torn apart' is too strong for worn shoes; use 'worn out'. Use 'when' rather than 'if' to indicate condition. Also 'prefer purchasing them' -> 'prefer to buy them' for clarity.

× I I prefer mid range brands that offers me wide range of durability and comfortness.

✓ I prefer mid-range brands that offer me a wide range of durability and comfort.

Subject 'brands' is plural, so verb must be 'offer' (not 'offers'). 'Comfortness' is incorrect; use 'comfort'. Add hyphen in 'mid-range' and include article 'a' before 'wide range'. Remove duplicate 'I'.

× I prefer qual quality over quantity so I purchase them whenever.

✓ I prefer quality over quantity, so I buy shoes when I need them.

'Qual quality' is a typo; use 'quality'. 'Purchase them whenever' is vague; specify 'when I need them'. Use simple present 'buy' for habitual action. Add comma before 'so'.

× It depends, for work or casual activity, I prefer wearing comfortable shoes because they allow me to enjoy the working schedule and provide consentment security.

✓ It depends. For work or casual activities, I prefer wearing comfortable shoes because they help me get through my work schedule and provide a sense of security.

Use plural 'activities'. 'Enjoy the working schedule' is awkward; better 'get through my work schedule' or 'be comfortable during work'. 'Consentment security' is incorrect; likely meant 'a sense of comfort and security' or 'a sense of security'. Replace with 'a sense of security'.

× Also for fashion and style, if I'm going out, I would like to explore new shoes that goes out with my style that make me feel confident.

✓ Also, for fashion and style, if I'm going out, I would like to try new shoes that go with my style and make me feel confident.

Verb must agree with plural 'shoes' so use 'go' not 'goes'. 'Go out with my style' is incorrect collocation; use 'go with my style' or 'suit my style'. Combine clauses correctly: 'that go with my style and make me feel confident.'