Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like buying shoes, then give frequency and a brief reason. Use correct grammar (plural nouns, verb forms) and avoid filler words. Keep responses under five sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy new shoes about twice a year because shoes are important for going out and need to be comfortable. For that reason I prefer comfortable styles rather than fashion-forward ones.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and provide one clear reason with a specific example. Avoid repeating phrases and correct tense/form. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to connect ideas. Keep to two or three sentences maximum.

Ví dụ: No, I haven't bought shoes online because sizes often vary between brands. For example, I once ordered a pair that looked good but turned out too small, so I prefer buying shoes in person.

Gợi ý: State the amount clearly and give a concise reason or breakdown. Avoid unclear phrases and repetitions. If the amount is large, clarify the time period (per year, per pair). Use linking words like 'because' or 'usually' to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: I usually spend about ¥10,000 a year on shoes because I buy several comfortable pairs from different brands. I prioritize comfort and durability, so I invest in quality shoes that last longer.

Gợi ý: Give a direct preference sentence, then add a specific reason and an example. Remove hesitations and redundant phrasing. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to make your answer coherent and stay within three sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because I often spend long hours walking or standing when I meet friends and family. For example, I choose cushioned sneakers for day trips so I don't get tired quickly.

× How often I like buying shoe and because shoes is important to go hang out or go somewhere.

✓ How often do I buy shoes? Shoes are important when I go out or hang out with others.

The original is run-on and lacks proper question form. Use auxiliary 'do' for the present simple question and plural 'shoes'. Separate into two clear sentences and use 'go out'/'hang out' which are idiomatic. Suggestions: Form questions with 'do/does' in present simple, use plural nouns where appropriate, and avoid combining unrelated clauses without punctuation.

× So I'm so I'm buying, uh, I buy shoes twice in a year and then I prefer a comfortable shoes.

✓ I buy shoes twice a year and I prefer comfortable shoes.

Redundant progressive 'I'm buying' is unnecessary for habitual actions; use simple present 'I buy'. 'Twice in a year' should be 'twice a year'. Use plural 'shoes' after 'comfortable'. Suggestions: Use simple present for habits, correct adverbial expressions of frequency, and match noun number to adjective phrases.

× No, I haven't ever bought shoes from online because it has many various kinds of shoes from many brands.

✓ No, I haven't ever bought shoes online because there are many different kinds of shoes from many brands.

Use 'bought shoes online' (no 'from'). 'It has' is incorrect; use 'there are' to indicate existence. 'Various' and 'different' are redundant; choose one. Suggestions: Use 'online' without 'from', and use 'there is/are' to describe availability.

× So the size is different, the sizes are different.

✓ So the sizes are different.

The repetition is redundant; use one clear plural subject. Maintain consistency in number. Suggestions: Avoid repeating the same idea; choose the correct plural form and keep it concise.

× So and I bought I'm maybe I've I buy from online and this size is not fit for me.

✓ I tried buying online, but the size did not fit me.

Original mixes tenses and contains disfluent fragments. Use past tense 'tried'/'bought' for a completed action and 'did not fit' for negative past. 'From online' should be 'online'. Suggestions: Keep tense consistent, remove filler fragments, and use correct verb forms for past events.

× I usually spend on shoes around CN¥10,000 because the measure range is the is half many kinds of comfortable issues from many brands, and it can be comfortable and affordable for me.

✓ I usually spend around CN¥10,000 on shoes because many brands offer a range of comfortable options that are affordable for me.

The phrase 'measure range is the is half many kinds of comfortable issues' is unclear and ungrammatical. Use 'many brands offer a range of comfortable options' and place the prepositional phrase 'on shoes' correctly. Suggestions: Use clear noun phrases like 'a range of comfortable options', place cost expressions before or after the object correctly, and avoid literal translations.

× I prefer comfortable shoes because, uh, if you, if you go to hang out with your friends or and family for a long time, the comfortable shoe is very fit to me.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes because if you go out with friends or family for a long time, comfortable shoes suit me well.

Avoid addressing the examiner as 'you' when describing personal preference; keep it in first person generalization or use 'I'. 'Go to hang out' is awkward—use 'go out' or 'hang out'. 'The comfortable shoe is very fit to me' is ungrammatical; use 'suit me well' or 'are comfortable for me'. Suggestions: Use natural verbs 'go out' or 'hang out', keep subject consistent, and use appropriate verbs like 'suit' or 'are comfortable'.

× So I prefer a comfortable shoe to stand for a long time.

✓ So I prefer comfortable shoes for standing for a long time.

Use plural 'comfortable shoes' rather than 'a comfortable shoe' when speaking generally. 'To stand for a long time' should be 'for standing for a long time' or 'when I have to stand for a long time'. Suggestions: Use plural forms for general statements and correct prepositional phrases with gerunds when describing purpose or activity.