Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar and clarity: start with a direct topic sentence, use correct verb forms, avoid repetition, and keep it within 3–4 concise sentences. Mention frequency clearly and give one specific supporting detail. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like buying shoes. I usually buy a new pair about once a month because I enjoy finding attractive and stylish designs. If I see shoes that catch my eye while shopping, I often purchase them immediately because they suit my taste.

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural and concise: start with a direct answer, give 1–2 clear reasons using full sentences and linking words (e.g., 'because', 'so'), and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Ví dụ: No, I have not bought shoes online. I prefer shopping in physical stores because I like to try shoes on for fit and quality, and I find online listings sometimes confusing or unreliable.

Gợi ý: Clarify and organize the answer: give a direct estimate or range, then qualify it with one or two reasons. Use correct vocabulary and avoid unclear fragments. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like 'however' or 'because'.

Ví dụ: It depends on the type of shoes, but I usually spend between $30 and $80 on a pair. I am willing to pay more for shoes that are comfortable and stylish, because comfort is my priority.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a clear condition-based preference: state a general preference, then explain with specific situations using linking words ('when', 'because', 'so'). Correct vocabulary and sentence structure are needed.

Ví dụ: I usually prefer comfortable shoes, but it depends on the occasion. For example, I choose fashionable shoes for parties because I want to look stylish, and comfortable shoes for hiking or long walks so my feet don't hurt.

× Is I do I like to buying shoes whenever I go outside for shopping and if I shop beautiful shoes like I catchy and attractive for me, I definitely buy that shoes and I once in a month I buy shoes.

✓ I like buying shoes whenever I go out shopping, and if I see beautiful shoes that are catchy and attractive to me, I definitely buy those shoes; I buy shoes once a month.

Multiple pronoun and subject errors: 'Is I do I' is ungrammatical; use 'I like' as the subject-verb clause. Use 'go out shopping' not 'go outside for shopping'. Replace 'if I shop beautiful shoes' with 'if I see beautiful shoes'. Use 'that are catchy and attractive to me' instead of 'like I catchy and attractive for me'. Use plural pronoun agreement: 'those shoes' instead of 'that shoes'. Use 'once a month' for frequency. Suggestion: simplify sentences, keep subject-verb structure 'I like', use correct demonstratives and plural agreement, and consistent word order.

× No, I have not ever bought shoes from online because online it's also confusing and also I don't really uh believe online products so I prefer to go visit physically and buy.

✓ No, I have never bought shoes online because online shopping is confusing and I don't really trust products sold online, so I prefer to visit stores in person and buy there.

Use of preposition 'from online' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'bought ... online'. 'Have not ever' is awkward; use 'have never'. 'Go visit physically' is incorrect; use 'visit stores in person'. Also replace 'believe online products' with 'trust products sold online'. Suggestion: use standard collocations 'buy online / shop online', use 'never' for negative adverb placement, and 'in person' for physical presence.

× It's uh, depending on the shoes, som Suzy are safe. Samsung are expensive, so I don't really much care about prices, but I I like I care about and I want it just which is comfortable. Who is attractive stylish That's.

✓ It depends on the shoes: some shoes are cheap, some shoes are expensive, so I don't care much about the price; I care that they are comfortable and attractive or stylish.

Fragmented and confused sentence structure: 'It's depending on' should be 'It depends on'. Nonsense words 'som Suzy' and 'Samsung' appear—likely intended 'some shoes' and 'some shoes'. Word order 'I don't really much care' should be 'I don't care much'. 'I like I care about and I want it just which is comfortable' is ungrammatical; correct to 'I care that they are comfortable'. 'Who is attractive stylish That's' is a fragment; correct to 'and attractive or stylish'. Suggestion: use simple clauses, correct subject-verb agreement, and logical connectors to join ideas.

× I prefer bored. Sometime I like to be fashionable and sometime I want comfortable shoes because it's a place where you are going.

✓ I prefer both. Sometimes I like to be fashionable and sometimes I want comfortable shoes depending on the place I am going.

'I prefer bored' is incorrect word choice; likely 'both'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb). 'It's a place where you are going' is awkward; use 'depending on the place I am going' or 'depending on where I am going'. Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary ('both'), use plural adverb 'sometimes', and use clearer subordinating phrases to express condition.

× So if I go CLO parties, I like to wear fashionable suits if I go hi hiking desk.

✓ So if I go to parties, I like to wear fashionable shoes; if I go hiking, I prefer comfortable shoes.

Multiple errors: 'CLO parties' unclear—use 'to parties'; 'wear fashionable suits' mismatches topic of shoes—use 'fashionable shoes'. 'If I go hi hiking desk' is garbled; correct to 'if I go hiking'. Suggestion: match vocabulary to topic, use 'to' with 'go to parties', and keep parallel structure when contrasting conditions.