Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và ngữ pháp chính xác. Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể (tần suất và lý do). Chú ý sử dụng thì phù hợp và loại bỏ các từ thừa/nhầm trật từ. Ví dụ tập trung vào “every month” hoặc “every two months” thay vì nói lặp lại. Ngoài ra sửa lỗi cấu trúc như “it's my favorite thing” và “in my free time I like going shopping”.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love buying shoes. I usually buy a new pair every month or every two months because shopping is my favourite hobby, although I sometimes limit myself due to a tight budget.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng, dùng thì hoàn chỉnh (present perfect/simple past) khi cần nói về kinh nghiệm. Tránh lặp từ như “it's it's” và dùng liên từ để làm câu mạch lạc (e.g. because, so). Cung cấp một chi tiết cụ thể về trải nghiệm (ví dụ: chất lượng, giao hàng, chính sách trả hàng).

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online several times because I often don't have enough time to shop in stores. Mostly I have been satisfied with the quality and fast delivery, although once I had to return a pair that didn't fit.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần chính xác về đơn vị tiền tệ và tránh con số mơ hồ. Nếu dùng hai đơn vị (ví dụ 200 thousand VND hoặc 1,000,000 VND) hãy giải thích rõ ràng. Thêm một câu nêu lý do vì sao chi nhiều cho thương hiệu cao cấp. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như “sometime” -> “sometimes” và cấu trúc số lượng.

Ví dụ: I usually spend around 200,000 VND on an average pair of shoes. Sometimes I spend much more, up to 1,000,000 VND, when I buy a pair from a luxury brand because I consider them an investment in comfort and style.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện: Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (I prefer...) và giải thích lý do bằng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc. Sửa ngữ pháp: “it makes me feel” và “less likely to get pain in my legs”. Dùng liên từ để liên kết ý (because, although). Giữ độ dài tối đa 3-4 câu và tránh cấu trúc rườm rà.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes. Although I like fashionable styles, comfortable shoes make walking and standing much easier and reduce the chance of leg pain.

× Oh I really love buying shoes because it's my favorite things in my free time is going shopping.

✓ Oh, I really love buying shoes because my favorite thing to do in my free time is going shopping.

The noun phrase 'things' should be singular 'thing' to match 'my favorite' (singular). The original sentence also has redundant 'is' causing structure problems. Suggestion: use 'my favorite thing to do in my free time is going shopping' to create a correct noun phrase and verb structure.

× I usually buy a pair of shoes each month or each or even 2 months because I don't have much money for this.

✓ I usually buy a pair of shoes every month or every two months because I don't have much money for this.

Use 'every' for repeating time intervals and 'two' instead of numeral '2' in formal writing. Also remove the extra 'each or'. Suggestion: say 'every month or every two months' for clarity and correct pluralization.

× Here I sometime buy shoes online because this time I don't have much time to go out and choose my favorite shoes.

✓ Sometimes I buy shoes online because I don't have much time to go out and choose my favorite shoes.

Use 'sometimes' (adverb) at the correct position and match simple present tense. 'This time' is unnecessary and confusing. Suggestion: start with 'Sometimes I buy...' and keep simple present for habitual actions.

× So I buy it online and it's it's really good. Yeah.

✓ So I buy them online and it's really good.

Refer to 'shoes' (plural) with 'them' not 'it'. Also remove duplicated 'it's'. Suggestion: use correct pronoun agreement: 'I buy them online'.

× Well I usually spend about 200 or more to buy my shoes and sometime I spend much more about 1,000,000 for my favorite shoe on luxury brands.

✓ Well, I usually spend about 200 or more to buy my shoes, and sometimes I spend much more, about 1,000,000, on my favorite shoes from luxury brands.

Use 'sometimes' not 'sometime'; ensure plural agreement 'shoes' and correct preposition 'on' for spending 'on' brands. Commas improve clarity. Suggestion: 'sometimes I spend much more, about 1,000,000, on my favorite shoes from luxury brands.'

× Oh I both love fashionable and comfortable shoes but to choose one I prefer I will choose comfortable because it's make me feel better when we move is makes me feel less be hurt in my legs.

✓ Oh, I love both fashionable and comfortable shoes, but if I have to choose one, I would choose comfortable because they make me feel better when I walk and hurt my legs less.

Multiple issues: pronoun agreement 'they' for 'shoes' (plural), verb agreement 'make' with plural subject, conditional phrasing 'if I have to choose' fits question, and awkward phrasing about hurting legs corrected to 'hurt my legs less' and 'when I walk' instead of 'when we move'. Suggestion: use 'if I have to choose, I would choose comfortable because they make me feel better when I walk and hurt my legs less.'