Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and clear: state whether you like buying shoes, say how often using correct time expressions, avoid hesitations and irrelevant details (e.g. names that don't explain). Use one topic sentence and one or two supporting reasons with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes. I usually buy new shoes about once a month because shopping helps me relax after a busy week and I like having a variety of styles to match different outfits.

Gợi ý: Structure your answer: start with a clear yes/no, then give two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because, and). Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and reduce redundancy (don't repeat 'definitely' or 'buying').

Ví dụ: Yes, I often buy shoes online because the sites provide detailed descriptions and customer reviews. For example, I can compare prices to find the best bargain, and I value clear return policies which make online shopping less risky.

Gợi ý: Be specific and realistic: give a clear estimate or a range, use correct currency and plural forms, and explain why with one supporting detail. Avoid filler words and contradictory claims (e.g. $900 and 'affordable').

Ví dụ: It depends on my budget, but I usually spend between $50 and $100 per pair because I prefer durable shoes that last several years. I’m willing to pay more for quality, but I try to avoid very expensive brands.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and explain briefly: choose one option and give clear reasons using linking words (because, so). Use accurate adjectives (e.g. 'active' instead of 'ballistic'), and avoid repetition and filler words.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because I’m quite active and wear them for long periods. Therefore, I usually choose shoes that are durable and reasonably priced rather than purely fashion-focused.

× Yes I do, I enjoy buying shoes twice a hour month because it helps me to, umm, escape from the hustle and bustles of daily nights so Brian Shields can motivate me to make more money.

✓ Yes, I do. I enjoy buying shoes twice a month because it helps me escape from the hustle and bustle of daily life, and it motivates me to try to make more money.

Errors: incorrect time expression 'twice a hour month' and noun forms 'hustle and bustles' and 'daily nights'; unnecessary filler words and awkward clause 'so Brian Shields can motivate me'. Suggestions: Use correct adverbial frequency 'twice a month'. Use singular fixed expression 'hustle and bustle' and 'daily life'. Remove unnecessary names/fillers unless relevant. Use commas to separate clauses and keep present simple tense consistent for habits. Next steps: Practice making concise habit statements: 'I enjoy X because it helps me Y.'

× Yes, definitely the main reason purchases online because they it shows up detailed information of the sneakers.

✓ Yes, definitely. The main reason I purchase online is that it shows detailed information about the sneakers.

Errors: missing subject for 'purchase' and incorrect word order 'purchases online', wrong pronoun 'they it' and awkward verb phrase 'shows up detailed information'. Suggestions: Use subject 'I' and correct verb form 'purchase'. Use 'is that' to introduce a reason and 'detailed information about' for correct preposition and noun phrase. Next steps: Form reasons with 'The main reason I X is that ...'.

× For example, I can search the best bargain price of the shoes and the return policy is quite reasonable.

✓ For example, I can search for the best bargain price for the shoes, and the return policy is quite reasonable.

Errors: missing preposition 'for' after 'search' and incorrect preposition 'of' with 'price'—use 'for the shoes'. Suggestions: Use 'search for' when looking for something and 'price for' when indicating which item's price you're comparing. Next steps: Practice collocations: 'search for', 'price for'.

× So I will definitely choose buying shoes online.

✓ So I will definitely choose to buy shoes online.

Error: incorrect use of gerund after 'choose' in this structure—'choose to do something' is more natural. Suggestions: Use 'choose to buy' instead of 'choose buying' when indicating a decision to perform an action. Next steps: Learn verbs that are typically followed by 'to' + infinitive versus gerund.

× Uh, so it's quite depending on my budget, I definitely go for, uh, shoes, which is, uh, durables and can last longer time, which is around $900 per pairs.

✓ Uh, so it quite depends on my budget. I usually go for shoes that are durable and can last a long time; I spend around $900 per pair.

Errors: incorrect progressive 'it's quite depending'—use simple present 'it depends'. Subject-verb agreement and noun forms: 'shoes, which is durables' should be 'shoes that are durable'. 'last longer time' should be 'last a long time'. 'per pairs' should be 'per pair'. Suggestions: Use simple present for habitual dependence, 'that/which are' with plural noun, and correct singular 'pair' after 'per'. Next steps: Review dependent clauses and collocations: 'depends on', 'durable', 'a long time', 'per pair'.

× Uh, which is, uh, is usually can, umm, affordable.

✓ They are usually affordable.

Errors: incorrect combination 'is usually can'—modal 'can' and auxiliary 'is' are misused together. Also number agreement: refer to 'shoes' with 'they'. Suggestions: Use a simple adjective with appropriate subject: 'They are usually affordable.' If expressing possibility, use 'can be affordable'. Next steps: Practice forming sentences with 'can be' versus 'is/are' + adjective.

× Well, I would say I would definitely go for purchasing are comfortable shoes since I am client and quite a ballistic person, I will shop for shoes which is at uh uh, durables and at a reasonable price.

✓ Well, I would say I would definitely choose comfortable shoes since I am a practical person. I will shop for shoes that are durable and reasonably priced.

Errors: incorrect phrase 'go for purchasing are comfortable shoes'—mixed structures; missing article 'a' before 'client' and wrong word 'ballistic' likely meant 'practical' or 'budget-conscious'; clause 'which is at uh uh, durables and at a reasonable price' has wrong relative pronoun and prepositions. Suggestions: Use 'choose' or 'go for' followed by noun phrase ('comfortable shoes'). Use 'a practical person' or a clearer descriptor. Use 'that are durable and reasonably priced' for the relative clause. Next steps: Replace unclear vocabulary ('ballistic') with intended adjective, and practice relative clauses: 'shoes that are ...'.