Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, and combine related ideas with linking words. Add one specific example to support your preference for quality (e.g., how long a pair lasts or a recent purchase). Keep answers to no more than 4–5 sentences.

Ví dụ: I do like buying shoes, but not very often — usually about twice a year because I prefer investing in high-quality pairs that last several years. For example, a good pair of leather trainers I bought two years ago is still in great condition. I also tend to choose brands like Adidas and Nike because they offer a good balance of style and durability.

Gợi ý: Make the answer more fluent and use clearer linking words. Give a concise topic sentence, then a specific example or brief reason. Avoid awkward phrasing like "price is driven by the demand" — instead explain simply that less popular models are cheaper or there are online discounts.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often buy shoes online because I can find better deals on less popular models. For instance, I once purchased a pair that wasn’t trendy but suited my style at a much lower price than in stores.

Gợi ý: Provide a clearer estimate and correct grammar. Start with a direct statement of how much you spend (e.g., a price range), then justify it with reasons and a specific example. Avoid sentence fragments and check noun-adjective agreement ("classic shoes", "an Air Force One").

Ví dụ: I usually spend a moderate amount, around $60–$120 per pair, because I try to balance style and affordability. For example, I often buy classic models like Nike Air Force Ones, which are versatile and cost around that range.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and concisely, then give a specific reason and brief example. Correct article and plural usage ("comfortable shoes", not "a comfortable shoes") and remove redundancy (don't repeat "comfortable"). Use a linking phrase like "because" or "so" once for clarity.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because I’m on my feet a lot during the day and need support to avoid fatigue. For example, I often choose cushioned sneakers that keep my feet warm and let me concentrate better at work and study.

× They're affordable and good style.

✓ They're affordable and stylish.

The phrase 'good style' is not a correct modifier for 'they'; 'stylish' is the adjective that describes appearance. Use the adjective form to modify the noun 'shoes' (or pronoun 'they'). Also, 'stylish' is more natural collocation with 'affordable'. Suggestion: Use adjective forms (stylish, comfortable) to describe items.

× I usually buy shoes twice a year because I prefer investing in good quality shoes that can last for years.

✓ I usually buy shoes twice a year because I prefer investing in good-quality shoes that can last for years.

The original sentence is largely correct but needs a hyphenated compound adjective 'good-quality' before the noun 'shoes'. This is an article/ adjective formation issue; hyphenation clarifies that 'good-quality' modifies 'shoes'. Suggestion: Use hyphenated form when two words jointly modify a noun.

× Yes I have and I actually prefer this way because the price is driven by the demand so if a pair that aren't popular but I personally like it then I can get it at a reasonable price.

✓ Yes, I have, and I actually prefer this way because the price is driven by demand, so if a pair isn't popular but I personally like it, I can get it at a reasonable price.

Errors: missing commas, incorrect use of 'the demand' (use general 'demand'), subject-verb agreement with 'pair' (singular) should be 'isn't', and redundancy 'but I personally like it' fits with singular. Also remove 'then' after 'if' in this clause. Suggestions: Ensure subjects and verbs agree in number and add commas to separate clauses.

× For example, I usually buy a Air Force One that is a very classical shoes and very wearable.

✓ For example, I usually buy an Air Force One, which is a very classic shoe and very wearable.

Errors: 'a' before a vowel sound should be 'an' ('Air'), 'Air Force One' is treated as a single model name so use 'an'. 'Classical' is incorrect for describing style; 'classic' is the right adjective. 'Shoes' should be singular 'shoe' to match 'an Air Force One' (a pair or model). Also use a relative clause 'which is' and comma for clarity. Suggestion: Match article to initial sound, use correct adjective choice, and keep number agreement between noun and modifiers.

× So I.

✓ So I stop there.

Original fragment 'So I.' is an incomplete sentence (no verb or object). It must be completed to convey meaning. I inferred likely intent to end the thought: 'So I stop there' or 'So I'm done' or 'So I don't buy more often.' Suggestion: Avoid sentence fragments; include a main verb and object to complete the idea.

× To be honest, I prefer comfortable shoes because I am on my feet quite a lot during the day, so I really need a comfortable shoes to keep my feet comfortable and warm that I can focus on my study and work better.

✓ To be honest, I prefer comfortable shoes because I am on my feet quite a lot during the day, so I really need comfortable shoes to keep my feet warm and comfortable so I can focus on my studies and work better.

Errors: 'a comfortable shoes' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' or change to 'a comfortable shoe'. Repetition of 'comfortable' was redundant; reordered to 'warm and comfortable'. 'Study' should be plural 'studies' when referring to academic work generally. Also replace 'that' with 'so' to show purpose/result. Suggestion: Ensure article-number agreement ('a' with singular), avoid redundancy, and use correct noun number for general activities ('studies').