Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more direct and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question (yes/no and frequency), then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid invented or confusing references and reduce grammar mistakes. Use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to connect ideas and keep answers under five sentences.

Ví dụ: I don't buy shoes very often; maybe once or twice a year. However, I enjoy reading footwear magazines and learning about different styles, such as sandals, high heels, and popular sneaker models. This helps me know what to look for when I do decide to buy a pair.

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitation and repetition. Give a clear direct answer (yes/no) then explain briefly why with a specific reason and an example. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'so' to make your explanation coherent. Keep it to three sentences to sound more fluent and controlled.

Ví dụ: I rarely buy shoes online because they often don't fit properly. For example, once I ordered sneakers that were slightly tight and gave me blisters, so now I prefer trying shoes on in a store before buying. I do browse online to compare styles and prices, though.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear, realistic estimate and explain the reason concisely. Begin with a direct topic sentence stating the typical amount, then give one or two specific reasons or comparisons. Avoid contradictory statements (saying 'not a lot' then giving a very high figure) and keep sentences short and coherent.

Ví dụ: I usually spend around $100 to $150 on shoes each year because I prioritize other expenses like collectibles and my suits for public speaking events. Shoes are lower on my shopping list, so I buy them only when necessary.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and complete the thought. Start with a clear preference (e.g., 'I prefer comfortable shoes that also look good'), then give specific reasons and an example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to make your explanation logical. Finish the sentence—avoid trailing off.

Ví dụ: I prefer shoes that are both comfortable and fashionable because I want to look good without suffering from blisters. For example, I choose sneakers with good arch support that also come in stylish colors so I can wear them to casual events and long walks.

× Shoes on not my street.

✓ Shoes are not my thing.

The original uses incorrect preposition 'on' and an idiom mix. Use 'are not my thing' to express dislike. Also add verb 'are' for correct sentence structure (subject-verb).

× There are not my alley actually.

✓ They're not really my alley, actually.

The phrase should be 'not really my alley' or 'not my cup of tea.' Also use contraction 'they're' (they are) to include the verb and use adverb 'really' in correct position.

× But I'm into reading footwear magazine and I know a thing or two about different types of shoes.

✓ But I'm into reading footwear magazines, and I know a thing or two about different types of shoes.

Countable noun 'magazine' should be plural if speaking generally, and sentences need a comma before coordinating conjunction 'and'. This corrects noun number and improves flow.

× Like I was Nicholas sandals, high heels and a bunch of Nike shoes that were used in Batman 1989 in which Batman or Bruce Wayne don't know what are those shoes to fight with the bad guys.

✓ For example, I was looking at sandals, high heels, and a bunch of Nike shoes used in Batman (1989), but Batman (Bruce Wayne) didn't know which shoes to use to fight the bad guys.

Original has pronoun and tense errors: 'don't' should be past 'didn't' to match past reference; word order 'what are those shoes' is incorrect for indirect clause—use 'which shoes to use.' Also cleaned up noun phrase and punctuation for clarity.

× Umm, this is 1 of umm, the very few things umm that would dodge like dodging the the bullet because umm, shoes need to fit you nice and snug umm, you need to uh, fit you tightly, uh, because otherwise you would have blisters on on your feet show.

✓ This is one of the very few things that I avoid because shoes need to fit you nicely and snugly; if they don't fit tightly, you'll get blisters on your feet.

Corrected numerals to words, removed fillers, fixed verb choice ('avoid' instead of 'dodge'), adjective/adverb forms ('nicely' and 'snugly'), and pronoun/verb agreement ('you'll' for future consequence). Removed redundant words and clarified meaning.

× browsing from different types of shoes online seems to be a good idea but umm, well clicking the purchase buttons umm, eluded to me every time because it's just not.

✓ Browsing different types of shoes online seems like a good idea, but clicking the purchase button eludes me every time because I'm not ready to buy.

Use 'browsing different types' (no 'from'), 'button' singular or 'buttons' consistent, and correct verb 'eludes' present tense. Replaced vague ending with clear clause 'because I'm not ready to buy.' Adjusted prepositions and verb usage.

× Not a lot compared to other expenses in my life from such as collectibles and my suit or my tuxedo because I'm a bit of a public speaker myself at many different events.

✓ Not a lot compared to other expenses in my life, such as collectibles and my suit or tuxedo, because I'm a bit of a public speaker and attend many different events.

Remove unnecessary 'from' before 'such as'. Added 'attend' to clarify relation to events; punctuation improved. This fixes preposition misuse and clarifies sentence structure.

× So shoes seem to be low on my To Do List and my to buy list.

✓ So shoes seem to be low on my to-do list and my buy list.

Hyphenate 'to-do' and keep parallel noun phrases; changed capitalization. This is a style correction and fixes word form consistency.

× But if I were to give you a guess it would be something around $1000.

✓ But if I were to guess, it would be around $1,000.

Simplified phrasing: 'give you a guess' is nonstandard — use 'guess.' Form 'would be around' is fine; formatted number and added comma for clarity.

× Why not both and shoes that look good and has some sort of aesthetic appeal to it at the same time and fits your fit tight and nice and snug.

✓ Why not both? Shoes that look good and have some sort of aesthetic appeal can also fit tightly, nicely, and snugly at the same time.

Subject-verb agreement: 'shoes' (plural) requires 'have' not 'has.' Reordered for clarity and corrected adjective/adverb forms ('tightly,' 'nicely,' 'snugly'). Removed repeated words.

× I'm sure that you don't have blisters on on your feet and you feel nice and walking around or jumping, running, doing whatever activities that you like.

✓ I'm sure you won't have blisters on your feet, and you'll feel comfortable walking, jumping, running, or doing whatever activities you like.

Changed tense to future conditional 'won't'/'you'll' to match implied consequence, removed duplicate 'on', replaced 'nice' with 'comfortable', and made verb forms parallel gerunds for activities.