Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve clarity, grammar and cohesion. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and word choice (e.g. 'I buy shoes about twice a year' not 'I use the shoes twice a year'). Avoid listing without connectors.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like buying shoes; I usually buy new pairs about twice a year. For example, I get a warm pair for winter and lightweight sandals for summer, because different seasons need different footwear.

Gợi ý: Use simple present and concise structure. Give one clear reason with a supporting detail and a linking word. Avoid repetition and incorrect forms like 'comfortability'—use 'comfort' or 'fit'.

Ví dụ: No, I have never bought shoes online because I prefer trying them on in a shop to check the fit. For instance, last year I returned a pair bought online because they looked fine in pictures but were uncomfortable when I tried them on.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, direct figure or range and explain briefly with correct grammar. Avoid unclear expressions like 'juicy person' or 'as less as'. Use linking words to explain reasons.

Ví dụ: I usually spend about 10% of my monthly budget on shoes because I only buy them a couple of times a year. For example, I might spend $50–$100 when I need durable walking shoes.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give a specific reason and example. Correct repetition and word order errors. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' properly and avoid unfinished sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because I walk a lot every day. For example, when I go shopping or commute, I choose cushioned sneakers rather than fashionable heels because comfort helps me walk longer without pain.

× I use the shoes twice a year.

✓ I use the shoes twice a year.

This sentence is acceptable but vague: 'use the shoes' is odd for frequency of buying; better: 'I buy shoes about twice a year.' However, since only grammar types from the list are to be corrected and present tense is appropriate, no grammatical change is required. Suggest clearer verb choice: replace 'use' with 'buy' to match the question context.

× I used to take winter shoes, snow shoes, and lightweight shoes for the summer season.

✓ I usually buy winter boots, snow boots, and lightweight shoes for the summer season.

The original uses 'take' and mixes plural forms awkwardly. The correction adjusts verb choice to 'buy' to match the question and uses 'boots' for winter/snow to be natural. This addresses plural/singular and word choice; the primary issue relates to appropriate noun forms and collocation (singular/plural consistency).

× No, I had never bought shoes online because I will prefer to purchase shoes from the shop because I want to wear them and feel like they are comfortable.

✓ No, I have never bought shoes online because I prefer to purchase shoes from a shop; I want to try them on to make sure they are comfortable.

The original mixes past perfect 'had never bought' with future/modal 'will prefer' and present reasons. The correct present perfect 'have never bought' is used for life experience up to now. 'Prefer' should be present simple to state a general preference. Replacing 'will prefer' and restructuring eliminates tense inconsistency.

× That is the reason I will not purchase the shoes online.

✓ That is the reason I do not purchase shoes online.

Using 'will not' implies future refusal; the speaker means a habitual action, so present simple 'do not purchase' is correct. Modal 'will' is incorrectly used for habitual behavior.

× Online we cannot confirm the size as well as comfortability of shoes.

✓ Online we cannot confirm the size or the comfort of shoes.

'Comfortability' is a nonstandard noun; use 'comfort.' 'As well as' is awkward here; 'or' fits better when listing alternatives. This corrects word choice and coordination.

× I spend my 10% of money on the shoes because I will not so juicy person for the shoes.

✓ I spend about 10% of my money on shoes because I am not excessive when it comes to buying shoes.

Original misuses quantifier placement ('my 10% of money') and contains unclear phrase 'so juicy person.' Correct form is 'about 10% of my money.' Replace unclear idiom with 'not excessive' to convey intended meaning.

× I think so shoes are as less as because so many shoes are quite confusing.

✓ I think shoes should be inexpensive because having so many choices is confusing.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. It mixes fragments and incorrect comparative structures. The correction produces a clear structure expressing the speaker's opinion that low price is preferable and excess choices cause confusion.

× Sometimes I do grocery by The Walking so that's why I prefer to come.

✓ Sometimes I do the grocery shopping by walking, so that's why I prefer comfortable shoes.

Original 'do grocery by The Walking' contains incorrect noun phrase and capitalisation; 'walking' should be used as the present participle after 'by' to indicate method: 'by walking.' Also clarified purpose and the object 'comfortable shoes.'

× I prefer comfortable shoe shoes as compared to fashionable shoes.

✓ I prefer comfortable shoes compared to fashionable shoes.

Original duplicates 'shoe shoes' and mixes singular/plural. Use plural 'shoes' consistently. 'Compared to' is sufficient; 'as compared to' is wordy.

× Fashionable shoes are only.

✓ Fashionable shoes are only for appearance.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking a complement. The correction completes the idea, stating that fashionable shoes are primarily for appearance. This fixes the sentence structure error.