Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct singular/plural and verb forms, and avoid contradictory phrases.

Ví dụ: Not really. I'm not a big shoe buyer, so I only buy new shoes once or twice a year, usually when my old ones are worn or need repair.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer, then explain briefly with specific reasons. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'fit me' not 'fit with my fate') and avoid exaggeration. Use a linking word like 'but' or 'however' properly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online, but they often didn't fit me. As a result I returned one pair and discarded another because the size and shape were wrong.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a typical price range, then give a clear contrast using linking words. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'types of shoes', 'heels', 'sandals'), and avoid trailing off. Be specific about amounts or reasons.

Ví dụ: It depends on the type of shoe. For everyday sandals or flip‑flops I usually spend around $10–20, but for dress shoes or heels I might spend $50–80 because they need better materials and support.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct statement of preference, then explain with specific reasons and an example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' and avoid vague endings. Correct article use and word choice ('a shoes' -> 'shoes' or 'a pair of shoes').

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because I wear them regularly and value support and durability. For example, I choose cushioned sneakers for daily walking rather than expensive designer shoes that I wouldn't wear often.

× I am not a shoe lover, which mean that I likely buy a new shoes at least they need to be repaired maybe just once a year or maybe twice a year.

✓ I am not a shoe lover, which means that I am likely to buy a new pair of shoes only when my current ones need to be repaired, maybe once or twice a year.

Errors: 'mean' should be 'means' to agree with singular subject 'which' clause (subject-verb agreement/third person singular). 'a new shoes' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'a new pair of shoes' or 'new shoes' without 'a'. Sentence structure is also confusing; add 'am likely to' and restructure to show purpose/time. Suggestion: use 'which means' and 'a new pair of shoes', and break long ideas into clearer clauses.

× Yes, I have bought few shoes online, however all of them are not fit with my fate which mean that I just bought it and throw it away.

✓ Yes, I have bought a few pairs of shoes online; however, none of them fit me, which means that I just bought them and threw them away.

Errors: 'bought few shoes' needs 'a few' and 'pairs of shoes' for countability (singular/plural). 'are not fit with my fate' is incorrect idiom and grammar; correct is 'none of them fit me'. 'which mean' should be 'which means' (third person singular). Tense inconsistency: 'throw it away' should match past experience 'threw them away'. Pronoun agreement: 'it' -> 'them'. Suggestion: use 'have bought a few pairs of shoes', 'none of them fit me', and keep tense consistent.

× Well, it depends on the kinds of cheers.

✓ Well, it depends on the kind of shoes.

Errors: 'kinds of cheers' has incorrect word 'cheers' (wrong vocabulary) and plural mismatch. Use 'kind of shoes' or 'kinds of shoes' depending on meaning. Suggestion: choose correct noun 'shoes' and match singular/plural: 'depends on the kind of shoes' or 'depends on the kinds of shoes'.

× For example if I bought a a pair of high heels of cars, it's quite expensive than just a scandal or a flip flop for example.

✓ For example, if I buy a pair of high heels, they are quite more expensive than sandals or flip-flops.

Errors: Tense should match general statement (present simple 'buy' not past 'bought'). Duplicate 'a a'. 'high heels of cars' is wrong vocabulary; likely 'high heels' only. Comparative form incorrect: 'quite expensive than' should be 'more expensive than' or 'quite a bit more expensive than'. 'scandal' should be 'sandals'. Also pluralization and hyphenation: 'flip-flops'. Suggestion: use present tense for general habits and correct comparative structure 'more expensive than'.

× And.

✓ (Remove fragment)

Errors: Single conjunction 'And.' is a sentence fragment without a verb. It should be removed or completed by connecting to the previous sentence. Suggestion: combine with previous sentence or finish the thought.

× Of course I prefer comfortable shoes because we buy a shoes in order to wear it daily or occasionally.

✓ Of course I prefer comfortable shoes because we buy shoes to wear daily or occasionally.

Errors: 'a shoes' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a' or use 'a shoe'. Pronoun agreement: 'wear it' should be 'wear them' if referring to 'shoes', but better to make general 'wear' without pronoun. Also unnecessary 'in order to'. Suggestion: say 'we buy shoes to wear daily or occasionally'.

× So there is no point or no sense to just buy a luxury or designer shoes and it is not.

✓ So there is no point in buying luxury or designer shoes if they are not comfortable.

Errors: 'no point or no sense to just buy' incorrect preposition and infinitive use; use 'no point in buying'. Article and noun agreement: 'a luxury or designer shoes' should be 'luxury or designer shoes' (no 'a'). Ending 'and it is not' is an incomplete clause. Suggestion: express condition clearly: 'if they are not comfortable' and use 'no point in buying'.