Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix tense/word choice errors.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes. I particularly like sneakers and Mary Jane shoes because they are stylish and easy to wear, so I often choose them for everyday use.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give 1–2 clear reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Replace unclear phrases (e.g. 'find a weight') with precise concerns like returns or fit.

Ví dụ: No, I haven’t bought shoes online because I worry about sizes. For example, the size charts can be unreliable, and I’m concerned it would be hard to return shoes that don’t fit.

Gợi ý: Give a direct amount and explain briefly why, using correct sentence structure. Avoid vague or confusing phrases and keep to one or two supporting sentences.

Ví dụ: I usually spend up to 2,000 baht on a pair of shoes because I prefer durable styles that will last a long time, possibly several years.

Gợi ý: State your preference clearly, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct vocabulary and phrasing (e.g. 'throw them in the bin', 'hurt my feet') will improve clarity.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes because fashionable ones often hurt my feet after a few wears. Therefore I choose shoes that allow me to walk long distances comfortably.

× I like yes, I like buying new shoes, especially the new collection of the sneakers and another type of shoe called Mary Jane is is really cute and really easy to wear.

✓ I like buying new shoes, especially the new sneaker collections, and another type of shoe called Mary Jane is really cute and very easy to wear.

The original sentence contains redundancy and incorrect article/pronoun use ('the sneakers' should be 'sneaker collections' or 'the new sneakers') and repeated words ('is is'). Also 'very' is a more natural modifier than 'really' when paired with 'easy to wear'. Suggest breaking into clearer phrases and removing duplication. Improvements: remove filler words ('yes'), correct noun phrase to 'sneaker collections' or 'the new sneakers', delete repeated 'is', and use 'very' for clarity.

× Like I can wear it everything it went from the student.

✓ I can wear them for everything, from school to casual occasions.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Pronouns and plurality are wrong ('it' refers to shoes; use 'them'), word order is incorrect, and 'went from the student' is nonsensical. The corrected version clarifies meaning and uses proper plural pronoun and prepositional phrase 'from school to casual occasions.' Suggest planning the intended meaning before speaking and using simple noun phrases.

× No, I have not brought shoes online because I couldn't rely on the size sheet that they provide.

✓ No, I have not bought shoes online because I couldn't rely on the size chart they provide.

The verb 'brought' is incorrect; the past participle of 'buy' is 'bought' (Grammar problem type: past tense issue). Also 'size sheet' is nonstandard; 'size chart' or 'size guide' is correct. Remove unnecessary 'that' for conciseness. Suggest learning irregular verbs and common collocations like 'size chart.'

× I think that if I bought it, it maybe not fit my size and I don't know what to do with the shoe that I already bought.

✓ I think that if I buy them, they may not fit my size and I wouldn't know what to do with the shoes I already bought.

Mixes past and modal forms incorrectly. Use present conditional 'if I buy' with modal 'may not' for possibility. Pronouns must agree in number ('them/they' for shoes). Also use 'wouldn't know' to express hypothetical uncertainty. Suggest keeping conditional clauses consistent and matching pronouns in number.

× I don't know how to find a weight.

✓ I don't know how to find the right size.

'Find a weight' is incorrect in this context; likely meant 'find the right size' or 'find the correct fit.' Replace with appropriate collocation. Suggest using common phrases like 'right size' or 'correct fit' when talking about shoe sizing.

× I would say around not more than 2000 baht is is the price that's reasonable for one choose that I can wear it for like 10 years.

✓ I would say around not more than 2000 baht is a reasonable price for a pair of shoes that I can wear for about 10 years.

Multiple article and word choice errors: 'is is' repeated, 'one choose' should be 'a pair of shoes' or 'one pair of shoes', and article 'a' needed before 'reasonable price'. Remove extra pronoun 'it'. Use 'about' for approximation. Suggest practicing article use ('a', 'an', 'the') and common collocations like 'pair of shoes.'

× Is might be a long time but the shouldn't I roar is mostly just.

✓ It might be a long time, but I still think it's reasonable.

Original is largely unintelligible with wrong modal and pronoun usage ('Is might', 'the shouldn't I roar'). Replace with clear modal 'might' and proper subject 'it' plus opinion phrase. Suggest speaking in shorter, clearer sentences and using common modal structures 'might be' and 'I think/it's reasonable.'

× I would prefer comfortable shoes because the fashionable one would make me uh, want to wear it again and just a few time wearing it I will just attach them into the bin because I hurt my feet and I like to walk very much wearing the comfortable make.

✓ I would prefer comfortable shoes because fashionable ones would make me reluctant to wear them often; after wearing them a few times I would throw them away because they hurt my feet, and I like walking a lot, so I prefer comfortable styles.

Numerous pronoun and number agreement errors: 'the fashionable one' vs 'fashionable ones', 'want to wear it again' should be 'want to wear them often', 'a few time' -> 'a few times', 'attach them into the bin' -> 'throw them away', 'comfortable make' -> 'comfortable styles'. The corrected sentence fixes plural agreement, verb forms, and word choice for clarity. Suggest focusing on subject-verb and pronoun-number agreement and using established verbs and nouns for actions (e.g., 'throw away' for discard).