Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatically accurate and slightly expand with a clear topic sentence and one supporting detail. Use correct verb forms and add a linking phrase if you give extra information. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like buying shoes, especially sports shoes for comfort. I usually buy them every few months because I run regularly, so I need shoes that provide good support and cushioning.

Gợi ý: Correct the tense and word order, and give a brief reason to make the answer more complete. Use a clear topic sentence followed by one supporting detail with a linking word.

Ví dụ: No, I haven't bought shoes online; I prefer buying them in shopping malls because I like trying them on first to check the fit and comfort.

Gợi ý: Give a concise, properly structured answer with correct number formatting and one reason or condition. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: I usually spend around 2000 (local currency) on a pair of shoes. However, if I find a particularly good or fashionable pair, I may spend more because I consider it an investment in comfort and durability.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear preference statement, then give two specific supporting reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (singular/plural, verb forms) and avoid long, run-on sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones. For example, when I play cricket or go for an early morning run, comfortable shoes protect my feet and improve my performance, so I choose comfort over style.

× 'Yes, I purchase sports shoes for comfort and it help me in running.'

✓ 'Yes, I purchase sports shoes for comfort and they help me with running.'

'It' refers to a singular subject but the antecedent is 'sports shoes' (plural), so the verb should agree with a plural subject. Also use 'with running' to show purpose. Suggestion: match subject and verb number (they help) and use correct preposition (help someone with something).'

× 'No, I am bought shoes on offline in in shopping mall.'

✓ 'No, I bought shoes offline in a shopping mall.'

'Am bought' mixes present auxiliary with past participle incorrectly; simple past 'bought' is required. Use 'offline' (adverb) not 'on offline' and include the article 'a' before 'shopping mall'. Remove duplicate 'in'.'

× 'Approximately I spend on purchase the shoes 2000 and sometimes it if I like some good pair of shoes they costly I can afford easily.'

✓ 'I usually spend about 2000 on shoes, and sometimes if I like a good pair that is expensive, I can still afford it.'

'Approximately' is better as 'I usually spend about'; correct preposition is 'spend on' with amount after 'about'. 'Purchase the shoes' is redundant. Needs articles: 'a good pair' and singular 'pair that is expensive'. Use 'still afford it' for clarity. Sentence was run-on; split and reorder for coherence.'

× 'I mostly preferred a comfortable shoes.'

✓ 'I mostly prefer comfortable shoes.'

'Preferred' (past) conflicts with present preference context; use present 'prefer'. 'A comfortable shoes' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'shoes' — remove the article or use singular 'a comfortable pair of shoes'.'

× 'They help me in lot of things.'

✓ 'They help me in a lot of things.'

'lot' needs 'a' as 'a lot of things'. Alternatively say 'They help me a lot.' Use correct collocation.'

× 'I played a cricket match any sports in they are helping early morning I wake up and running going to running and they help me lot of in physical activities.'

✓ 'I play cricket and other sports; they help me a lot. In the early morning I wake up and go for a run, and the shoes help me in physical activities.'

Original is a run-on with mixed tenses and incorrect word order. Use present simple 'I play' for habitual actions. Separate ideas into sentences. Use 'go for a run' not 'going to running', and 'help me in physical activities' or 'help me with physical activities'. Ensure verb forms and prepositions are correct.'