Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases (e.g., 'long time ING'). Use correct grammar for frequency (e.g., 'not very often').

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy buying shoes, but I don't buy them very often. I prefer to invest in high-quality pairs because they last longer and are more comfortable, so I only purchase new shoes when my old ones wear out.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct answer and one or two specific reasons using linking words. Reduce repetition and fix awkward phrasing (e.g., 'I have fit like very normal size'). Replace fillers with concise language and correct verb forms.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually buy shoes online because I have a standard size and most stores provide accurate size charts. As a result, shoes typically fit me well, and online shopping is more convenient.

Gợi ý: Begin with a brief topic sentence stating the typical price range, then add one specific comment about value. Remove hesitations and use correct currency name and 'lari' spelling. Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' for coherence.

Ví dụ: Usually I spend between 200 and 400 Georgian lari on a pair of shoes. I find this range offers a good balance between quality and price, so the shoes are durable without being excessively expensive.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly: state preference and give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid broken sentences and unclear endings. Use precise expressions (e.g., 'I prefer shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable because I work long hours and need professional-looking footwear').

Ví dụ: I prefer shoes that are both fashionable and comfortable because I work long hours and need them to look professional. For example, I often choose black leather shoes that match my outfits and still feel comfortable to wear all day.

× I like buying shoes and generally clothes and about the shoes, uh, I, I'm not buying shoes really often because like if I buy it must be very high price because of the quality.

✓ I like buying shoes and generally clothes, but I don't buy shoes very often because when I do buy them they must be of very high quality and high price.

The original contains incorrect continuous verb use ('I'm not buying shoes really often') and awkward phrasing. Use simple present for habitual actions ('I don't buy shoes very often'). Use plural agreement for 'them' instead of 'it' when referring to 'shoes'. Rephrase 'must be very high price' to 'must be of very high quality and high price' for grammatical correctness and clarity. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and ensure pronoun number agreement.

× I always buy shoes online because I I have fit like very normal size.

✓ I always buy shoes online because I have a very standard size.

The phrase 'I have fit like very normal size' is ungrammatical. Use 'have' with a noun phrase 'a very standard size' to state body measurements. Also remove duplicated 'I'. Suggestion: use adjective 'standard' or 'average' and include article 'a'.

× It's not very picky.

✓ I'm not very picky.

'It's not very picky' uses incorrect subject; the speaker (a person) should be the subject. Change to 'I'm not very picky.' Suggestion: refer to the speaker directly when describing preferences.

× Umm it's stable and I know my size and every uh on the side that I buy shoes uh, I have exact uh size.

✓ It's consistent and I know my size; whenever I buy shoes online I have the exact size.

Original has broken structure and unclear phrases ('every uh on the side that I buy shoes'). Use 'whenever' or 'when' to link condition and clarify 'exact size'. Replace 'stable' with 'consistent' for natural collocation. Suggestion: combine clauses clearly and use connective words.

× Usually it fits.

✓ They usually fit.

Subject-verb agreement and pronoun reference: 'it' incorrectly refers to 'shoes' (plural). Use plural pronoun 'they'. Maintain simple present for habitual truth. Suggestion: ensure pronoun number matches the noun.

× So usually now when I buy shoes uh, I know my style and I know I have the price range.

✓ So usually now when I buy shoes, I know my style and I know my price range.

The phrase 'I know I have the price range' is awkward. Use 'I know my price range' to express budget. Keep simple present for habitual actions. Suggestion: remove unnecessary 'I have' and use possessive 'my'.

× So usually it, it is umm from 200 Georgian Larry till 400 Georgian Larry.

✓ So usually it is from 200 Georgian Lari to 400 Georgian Lari.

Use correct currency plural 'Lari' and preposition 'to' instead of 'till' for price ranges. Remove duplicated words and extra fillers. Suggestion: write numbers with correct currency form and 'from... to...' pattern.

× So it's good pricing, not that high and not that cheap.

✓ So it's reasonably priced, not too expensive and not too cheap.

'Good pricing' is unnatural; use 'reasonably priced'. Use comparative modifiers 'too expensive'/'too cheap' for natural expression. Suggestion: prefer idiomatic adjective phrases for price judgments.

× Uh, actually both, uh, fashion, uh, shoes must be for me, fashionable and comfortable because I work a lot and it looks, it must look good.

✓ Actually both; shoes must be fashionable and comfortable for me because I work a lot and my outfit must look good.

Original misorders pronouns and subjects ('it looks, it must look good') and redundant commas. Clarify that 'my outfit must look good' and place adjectives correctly. Suggestion: use clear subject 'my outfit' and concise clauses.

× The, the outfit that I'm wearing. It must be, umm, on, uh, look and I don't it usually it's a black.

✓ The outfit that I'm wearing must look good, and I usually wear black.

Original has sentence fragments and incorrect phrases ('It must be on look' and 'I don't it usually it's a black'). Combine fragments into a complete sentence, use 'must look good' and correct verb 'wear' with color 'black' (no article). Suggestion: form complete sentences and use correct verb for clothing ('wear').