Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitations, correct verb forms, and give one or two brief supporting reasons with linking words. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I don't buy shoes very often. Firstly, they are usually expensive, so I prefer to keep my current pairs for a long time. Moreover, modern shoes are generally well made, so I only replace them when they are worn out.

Gợi ý: Use correct verb forms and clearer phrasing. Begin with a direct answer, then give concise details using linking words. Avoid repetition and be specific about the experience (how you chose, whether it fitted).

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online, for example on Amazon. I chose a pair by looking at detailed photos and customer reviews, and I picked a style that matched my usual outfits.

Gợi ý: Be precise and consistent with amounts and wording. Use a clear topic sentence stating your typical budget, then give a brief reason and a linking word. Avoid contradictory sentences by reconciling preference and reality.

Ví dụ: I usually spend around ¥10,000 on a pair of shoes, although I try to buy cheaper options when possible. For that reason, I often look for sales or budget brands to save money.

Gợi ý: State your preference clearly and give two concise, specific reasons using linking words. Remove filler words and repetitions, and use natural phrasing about health and daily use.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes rather than fashionable ones because they reduce the risk of injuries and are better for my posture. For everyday use, comfort is more important to me than style.

× I personally do not like buying shoes so often because it take costs a lot and I believe I don't have to change shoes very often because nowadays products are quite, uh, of good qualities.

✓ I personally do not like buying shoes so often because it takes a lot of money and I believe I don't have to change shoes very often because nowadays products are of good quality.

There are multiple issues: 'take costs a lot' is ungrammatical — use 'takes a lot of money' or 'costs a lot'; 'it takes' requires third-person singular verb (see ID 2/27) but main issue is sentence structure and word choice (There be is not directly applicable, but correction follows natural English). Suggestion: simplify to 'it costs a lot' or 'it takes a lot of money' and use 'good quality' (uncountable noun) rather than 'good qualities'. Ensure subject-verb agreement by using 'it takes' or 'it costs'.

× I personally do not like buying shoes so often because it take costs a lot and I believe I don't have to change shoes very often because nowadays products are quite, uh, of good qualities.

✓ I personally do not like buying shoes so often because it costs a lot and I believe I don't have to change shoes very often because nowadays products are of good quality.

The phrase 'it take costs a lot' mixes verbs and has wrong verb forms. Use 'it costs a lot' (singular subject 'it' + third-person singular verb 'costs'). Also 'of good qualities' is incorrect; use the uncountable noun phrase 'good quality'. Suggest breaking into two clauses: 'because it costs a lot, and I believe I don't have to change shoes very often.'

× Yes, I have ever purchased a a pair of shoes online on the easy side called Amazon where I could find my ideal shoes by watching the pictures on that store and determine which one would go well with my fashion.

✓ Yes, I have purchased a pair of shoes online on the e-commerce site called Amazon, where I could find my ideal shoes by looking at the pictures and decide which ones would go well with my style.

Use of 'have ever purchased' is awkward in present perfect; 'ever' is unnecessary in affirmative sentences. 'a a' is a typo. 'easy side' is wrong; use 'e-commerce site' or 'online site'. 'watching the pictures' should be 'looking at the pictures'. 'determine which one would go well with my fashion' — use 'decide which ones would go well with my style.' Maintain present perfect 'have purchased' for experience; use plural 'ones' to match 'shoes'.

× Yes, I have ever purchased a a pair of shoes online on the easy side called Amazon where I could find my ideal shoes by watching the pictures on that store and determine which one would go well with my fashion.

✓ Yes, I have purchased a pair of shoes online on the e-commerce site called Amazon, where I could find my ideal shoes by looking at the pictures and decide which ones would go well with my style.

Mismatch between singular and plural: 'a pair of shoes' is singular unit but later 'determine which one' refers to 'shoes' plural; use 'which ones'. Also remove duplicate 'a'. Use consistent plural/singular references.

× I generally spend ¥10,000 for an apparel shoes. There are many expensive shoes that cost around more than ¥10,000. However, I want to save money. I generally purchase shoes at lower prices.

✓ I generally spend ¥10,000 on a pair of shoes. There are many expensive shoes that cost more than ¥10,000. However, I want to save money, so I usually buy shoes at lower prices.

Use 'on' rather than 'for' when talking about money spent. 'an apparel shoes' mixes article and countability — use 'a pair of shoes' or 'a pair of trainers'. 'cost around more than' is redundant; use 'cost more than' or 'cost around ¥10,000.' Suggested linking sentence for flow: combine last two sentences with 'so'.

× I generally spend ¥10,000 for an apparel shoes. There are many expensive shoes that cost around more than ¥10,000. However, I want to save money. I generally purchase shoes at lower prices.

✓ I generally spend ¥10,000 on a pair of shoes. There are many expensive shoes that cost more than ¥10,000. However, I want to save money, so I generally buy shoes at lower prices.

Use simple present 'spend' and 'buy' consistently for habitual actions. Replace awkward phrases with natural collocations: 'spend on' and 'a pair of shoes'. Remove redundancy 'around more than'.

× I would love to wear comfortable shoes as a function of shoes. It is better to umm prevent me from getting hurt or umm improving my health. So having shoes, having shoes that is comfortable is my priority. Therefore I choose the comfortable shoes.

✓ I would prefer to wear comfortable shoes because they prevent me from getting hurt and improve my health. Having comfortable shoes is my priority, so I choose comfortable shoes.

Awkward adjective/adverb usage and phrasing: 'as a function of shoes' is incorrect; use 'because'. 'It is better to prevent me from getting hurt or improving my health' mixes structures; combine with appropriate verbs: 'prevent me from getting hurt and improve my health.' Subject-verb agreement: 'shoes that is comfortable' should be 'shoes that are comfortable' but simpler: 'comfortable shoes.' Remove filler words 'umm.' Suggest concise sentences and correct verb agreement.

× So having shoes, having shoes that is comfortable is my priority.

✓ Having shoes that are comfortable is my priority.

Subject 'shoes' is plural, so use 'are' not 'is'. Also remove repetition 'having shoes, having shoes' to make sentence concise. Use 'comfortable' as adjective modifying 'shoes'.