Shoes— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct repetition; start with a clear topic sentence, then give frequency and where you shop with a linking word. Correct small grammar slips (remove duplicate words) and use a time phrase to quantify frequency.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like buying shoes. I buy them quite often — usually every month — and I shop both in stores and online depending on what I need.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer: give a clear topic sentence, then give specific supporting details using linking words (for example, however). Avoid vague phrasing and grammatical errors; use specific examples and concise comparisons about price and accuracy of images/sizes.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have bought shoes online many times. Generally they arrive in good condition and sizes are accurate; however, some sellers list items that look different in photos or send the wrong model, so I usually read reviews before buying.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct estimate and then explain factors that affect spending. Avoid repetition and unclear numbers; state currency clearly and a realistic price range. Use linking words to structure the answer (for example, usually, but, for instance).

Ví dụ: It depends, but I usually spend between 100 and 300 dirhams on a pair. For example, I bought a pair of Hermes shoes recently which cost around 150–200 dirhams; I spend more on branded or formal shoes and less on everyday trainers.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear preference sentence, then explain with specific examples and use linking words (for example, however, for special occasions). Remove fillers and finish the thought coherently. Mention contexts when you choose each type.

Ví dụ: I prefer comfortable shoes overall, but I also wear fashionable heels for special occasions. For instance, I wear heels to weddings or Eid celebrations, while I choose sneakers or loafers for daily errands and work because they are more practical.

× I love to buy shoes very much and I I buy shoes very often and in shop also and online also.

✓ I love buying shoes very much, and I buy them very often, both in shops and online.

Plural/singular inconsistency and repetition: 'in shop' should be plural 'in shops'; 'I I' is repetition; 'buy shoes' followed by 'and in shop also' needs pronoun 'them' for clarity. Use 'buying' for a natural expression and 'both in shops and online' to parallel items.

× Yes, I have bought shoes online many times and they come in very good condition and the size is also accurate and the some shoes are expensive online and some shoes are cheaper.

✓ Yes, I have bought shoes online many times. They usually arrive in very good condition, the sizes are accurate, and some shoes are expensive online while others are cheaper.

Verb agreement and article errors: 'they come' is acceptable but 'usually arrive' is more natural. 'the size is also accurate' should be plural 'sizes are accurate' to match 'shoes'. 'the some shoes' has an incorrect article; use 'some' without 'the'. Use 'while others' to contrast.

× But some people have experienced that the online shoes are not mean they show something else and they send something else.

✓ But some people have experienced that online sellers show one thing and send something different.

Awkward and incorrect structure: 'are not mean they show something else and they send something else' is ungrammatical. Simplify to 'sellers show one thing and send something different' for clarity and correct verb use.

× It depends how much the shoes cost, it's if it's cheaper or it's expensive, it's matter and it's depends upon the shoes and the shop or the brand.

✓ It depends on how much the shoes cost; whether they are cheap or expensive, it depends on the shoes and on the shop or brand.

Preposition and verb issues: use 'depends on' not 'depends how'. 'it's if it's cheaper or it's expensive' is ungrammatical; use 'whether they are cheap or expensive'. Remove redundant 'it's matter'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct prepositions.

× And recently I bought the Hermes shoes. It is a very good brand, even famous brand and it costs me 1:50 to 200 dirhams.

✓ Recently I bought Hermes shoes. It is a very good and famous brand, and it cost me 150 to 200 dirhams.

Article and number formatting: 'the Hermes shoes' is better as 'Hermes shoes' or 'a pair of Hermes shoes'. 'even famous brand' needs 'famous' with an article or combined as 'very good and famous brand'. Use 'cost' in past tense 'cost' (not 'costs') after 'I bought'. '1:50' likely means '150'—use correct numeric form.

× I prefer both fashionable shoes and as well as the comfortable shoes, uh, but more comfortable shoes, uh, the fashionable shoes like heels, I used to prefer and wear them on the equations occasions like wedding and Eid like this and uh, form, uh, in daily routine, I use comfortable shoes.

✓ I prefer both fashionable and comfortable shoes, but I prefer comfortable shoes more. I used to prefer fashionable shoes like heels and wear them on special occasions such as weddings and Eid. In my daily routine, I wear comfortable shoes.

Pronoun and article issues and word choice: 'both fashionable shoes and as well as the comfortable shoes' is redundant; simplify to 'both fashionable and comfortable shoes'. 'more comfortable shoes' should be 'prefer comfortable shoes more'. 'equations occasions' is incorrect—use 'special occasions'. 'I use comfortable shoes' better as 'I wear comfortable shoes' in this context.