Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ваша відповідь містить граматичні помилки та деякі незрозумілі фрази. Спробуйте використовувати простіші речення з правильною граматикою, уникайте повторень і використовуйте зв'язки для кращої логіки. Наприклад, замість 'We should not making nails' краще сказати 'We are not allowed to have long or colorful nails'.

Ví dụ: My school has strict rules. For example, we must wear a special uniform and have specific haircuts. Also, we are not allowed to have long or colorful nails, and wearing long earrings is prohibited.

Gợi ý: Ваша відповідь має деякі граматичні помилки і не дуже чітку структуру. Спробуйте почати з чіткої думки, потім додати причини, використовуючи зв'язки, наприклад 'because' або 'however'.

Ví dụ: I believe that having some rules at school is important because they help us concentrate and stay disciplined. However, too many rules might make students unhappy and reduce their enjoyment of school.

Gợi ý: Ваша відповідь містить помилки в граматиці та слововживанні. Спробуйте будувати речення більш чітко, використовуючи правильні форми дієслів і зв'язки для логічності.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. She is my English teacher and is very kind to me. We have a friendly relationship, and she teaches us effectively. I learn something new from her lessons every day.

× I don't have other schools which are more strict than mine.

✓ I don't have any other schools that are stricter than mine.

The phrase 'other schools' is plural but the context suggests comparison with singular 'mine'. Also, 'more strict' should be 'stricter' as the comparative form of 'strict'. Use 'any other schools' to indicate comparison with other schools in general.

× Because we have special uniform for our students, special haircuts.

✓ Because we have special uniforms for our students and special haircuts.

'Uniform' should be plural 'uniforms' because it refers to clothing for multiple students. Also, the sentence needs a conjunction 'and' to connect the two items properly.

× We should not making nails for school long or colorful.

✓ We should not have long or colorful nails for school.

The phrase 'making nails' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'have nails'. Also, 'long or colorful' modifies 'nails'. The verb 'should not' should be followed by the base verb 'have'.

× We shouldn't wear earrings like long earrings.

✓ We shouldn't wear earrings like long ones.

Repeating 'earrings' is redundant. Use 'long ones' to refer back to earrings. Also, 'like' is used correctly here to compare types of earrings.

× Well, I think rules must be in the school because it help us to concentrate on our work and do not be less disciplined.

✓ Well, I think rules must be in the school because they help us concentrate on our work and not be less disciplined.

'It' should be 'they' to refer to 'rules' (plural). 'Help' should be without 'to' after modal verb 'must'. The phrase 'do not be less disciplined' is awkward; 'not be less disciplined' is clearer.

× But I think we don't need much rules because at the same time we want to enjoy our school so much and we would hate it.

✓ But I think we don't need many rules because at the same time we want to enjoy our school so much and we would hate it.

'Rules' is countable plural, so 'many' should be used instead of 'much'. 'Much' is used with uncountable nouns.

× Guess I have that kind of teacher.

✓ I guess I have that kind of teacher.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I' at the beginning. 'Guess' alone is informal and incomplete in this context.

× It actually my teacher of English.

✓ She is actually my English teacher.

The sentence lacks a verb. 'It actually my teacher' is incorrect; it should be 'She is actually my English teacher.' Also, 'teacher of English' is better expressed as 'English teacher.'

× She is very nice to me and we are practically friends.

✓ She is very nice to me, and we are practically friends.

A comma is needed before 'and' to separate two independent clauses. The pronouns are used correctly.

× In addition, she's very good at English and she studied us very well and I learn from her lessons something every day.

✓ In addition, she's very good at English, she teaches us very well, and I learn something from her lessons every day.

'She studied us' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'she teaches us'. 'I learn from her lessons something every day' should be 'I learn something from her lessons every day' for correct word order and tense consistency.