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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Thí sinh

Yes, there are roads. At my school we have to wear uniforms to keep everyone equal and disciplined. Also, we can't use our forms in class because it can distract us from learning.

Giám khảo

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Thí sinh

No, I don't think many rules is good for students. Too many rules stop them from thinking for themselves. It's important for them. It's important for them to learn to learn how to make their own decisions.

Giám khảo

Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?

Thí sinh

Yes, my English teacher is good at at teaching. She explains hard things in a simple way so everyone can understand. I really think she is great at her job.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答中有一个明显的错误,'roads' 应该是 'rules'。此外,回答中有些表达不够自然,比如 'we can't use our forms' 应该是 'we can't use our phones'。建议注意单词拼写和用词准确性,同时回答可以更简洁自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are rules at my school. For example, we have to wear uniforms to promote equality and discipline. Also, using phones in class is not allowed because it distracts students from learning.

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如 'many rules is' 应为 'many rules are',且有重复表达 'It's important for them'。建议注意语法一致性,避免重复,并且可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: No, I don't think having many rules is good for students because it stops them from thinking independently. Moreover, it's important for students to learn how to make their own decisions.

Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词 'at at',需要注意发音和表达的准确性。回答结构较好,但可以增加一些具体细节来丰富内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, my English teacher is excellent at teaching. She explains difficult concepts in a simple and clear way, which helps all students understand. I really admire her dedication and teaching skills.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× No, I don't think many rules is good for students.

No, I don't think many rules are good for students.

这里的主语是复数形式“many rules”,谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”,而不是单数“is”,以保持主谓一致。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Too many rules stop them from thinking for themselves.

Too many rules stop students from thinking for themselves.

句中“them”指代不明确,最好用具体名词“students”来代替,避免歧义。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× It's important for them.

It's important for students.

同上,使用具体名词“students”代替不明确的代词“them”,使句意更清晰。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× It's important for them to learn to learn how to make their own decisions.

It's important for students to learn how to make their own decisions.

句中“them”指代不明确,改为“students”更准确;另外“to learn to learn”重复,应去掉一个“to learn”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, my English teacher is good at at teaching.

Yes, my English teacher is good at teaching.

“at”重复出现,应删除多余的一个,保持句子正确。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
GreatConsiderable; Large; Prominent; Magnificent; Enthusiastic
HardFirm; Arduous; Difficult; Harsh; Strict
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
SimpleStraightforward; Clear; Plain; Candid
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