Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are strict rules about attendance and punctuality to ensure that students maintain a high standard of study. For example, students who are less frequently may face warnings or other consequences.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Well, I don't think so. I think it's important to give students freedom and, uh, only three of rules may make them more disciplined and more creative.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a teacher who is so patient that I really enjoy asking questions in my major course. I've sometimes strict formulas leave me stuck and I don't know how to move on. So I talked to her and he gave me the answer.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,例如“students who are less frequently”表达不完整,建议使用完整的句子表达具体情况,同时避免冗余。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are strict rules about attendance and punctuality to ensure students maintain a high standard of study. For example, students who are frequently absent may receive warnings or other penalties.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,如“only three of rules”不符合英语习惯,且使用了口语填充词“uh”,建议使用更准确的表达并避免口语填充词。
Ví dụ: Well, I don't think so. I believe giving students some freedom is important because too many rules might restrict their creativity and discipline.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和代词混用问题,如“I've sometimes strict formulas”表达不清晰,“he gave me the answer”与前文“her”不一致,建议注意语法和代词一致性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have a very patient teacher in my major course. Sometimes, difficult formulas leave me stuck, so I ask her for help, and she always explains clearly.
× For example, students who are less frequently may face warnings or other consequences.
✓ For example, students who are less frequent may face warnings or other consequences.
这里的错误是复数和单数形式的使用不当。'less frequently' 是副词短语,不能用来修饰名词 'students'。应使用形容词 'less frequent' 来修饰名词。建议用形容词形式来描述学生的频率。
× only three of rules may make them more disciplined and more creative.
✓ only a few rules may make them more disciplined and more creative.
这里 'three of rules' 用法不正确,'three of' 通常用于特定的复数名词前,需要限定范围。此处应使用 'a few rules' 来表示少量规则。建议使用正确的量词搭配名词。
× So I talked to her and he gave me the answer.
✓ So I talked to her and she gave me the answer.
前文提到的老师是女性,用了 'her',后面却用 'he',代词不一致。应保持代词一致,使用 'she'。建议注意代词的性别一致性。