Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は自然で効果的ですが、もう少し具体的な詳細や個人的な意見を加えるとより良くなります。例えば、ルールがどのように学生生活に影響したかを述べると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, my high school had strict rules, especially about uniforms. For instance, we had to wear a proper uniform and ensure skirt lengths covered the knee. These rules helped maintain discipline and a neat appearance, which created a respectful learning environment.

Gợi ý: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りも多いため、意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に直接答え、理由や具体例を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: I believe that younger children, like those aged 6 or 7, benefit from having more rules because it helps them learn proper behavior. However, older students might do better with fewer rules to encourage independence and responsibility.

Gợi ý: 回答は内容が明確で自然ですが、文法の小さな誤りを直し、より流暢に話す練習をすると良いでしょう。例えば、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより効果的です。

Ví dụ: Although I am currently working and don't meet teachers often, when I was a student, I had several teachers who did their jobs very well. For example, my math teacher was patient and always explained difficult topics clearly to ensure everyone understood.

× I think it depends on the student aid for.

✓ I think it depends on the student.

The phrase 'student aid for' is incorrect and unclear. The correct pronoun 'student' should be used here to refer to the individual. Avoid adding unnecessary words that confuse the meaning.

× For young children such as those who are 6 or 7 years old, having more rules is beneficial because it helps them understand borderless and behavior properly.

✓ For young children such as those who are 6 or 7 years old, having more rules is beneficial because it helps them understand boundaries and behave properly.

The word 'borderless' is incorrect in this context; the correct noun is 'boundaries' meaning limits or rules. Also, 'behavior' should be changed to the verb form 'behave' to correctly express the action.

× However, all the student might benefit more from few rules at it.

✓ However, all the students might benefit more from fewer rules.

The singular 'student' should be plural 'students' to match 'all'. 'Few' should be 'fewer' when referring to countable nouns like 'rules'. The phrase 'at it' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× Currently I'm working at the company, so I don't have many opportunity to meet teacher.

✓ Currently I'm working at a company, so I don't have many opportunities to meet teachers.

'Opportunity' should be plural 'opportunities' to match 'many'. 'The company' should be 'a company' unless a specific company is known. 'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to generalize the statement.

× However, when I was a student, I had a few teachers who did their job very well because they were patient and explained difficult topic clearly.

✓ However, when I was a student, I had a few teachers who did their job very well because they were patient and explained difficult topics clearly.

The noun 'topic' should be plural 'topics' to match the context of multiple subjects. The adverb 'clearly' is correctly used here.