Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think when I was in my middle school, there are many rules that, for example, we should come to school before 8:00 AM and we must do down our homework.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think so, because as they are students, they cannot regulate and manage their study time in schools well. So schools by making rules can help them to manage their time and study.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, to be honest, I I currently study electronic guitar recently, so I might get a teacher is a very patient and a nice person. For example, he was the place.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 你的回答有些语法错误,时态使用不准确,且表达不够自然。建议注意时态一致性,避免冗余表达,并且用更地道的表达方式描述规则。
Ví dụ: Yes, when I was in middle school, there were many rules. For example, we had to arrive at school before 8:00 AM and complete our homework on time.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较为简单,表达有些重复,建议使用连接词使句子更连贯,同时提供更具体的理由或例子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe more rules can help students because they often struggle to manage their study time effectively. Therefore, clear rules can guide them to organize their schedule better and improve their learning outcomes.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达混乱,语法错误较多,缺乏具体细节。建议简洁明了地描述老师的特点,并举具体例子支持观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have a guitar teacher who is very patient and kind. For example, he always explains difficult techniques clearly and encourages me when I make mistakes.
× Yes, I think when I was in my middle school, there are many rules that, for example, we should come to school before 8:00 AM and we must do down our homework.
✓ Yes, I think when I was in my middle school, there were many rules, for example, we should come to school before 8:00 AM and we must do our homework.
句子中描述过去的情况,应该使用过去时态的“there were”而不是现在时态的“there are”。此外,“do down our homework”中的“down”是不必要的,应去掉。
× Yes, to be honest, I I currently study electronic guitar recently, so I might get a teacher is a very patient and a nice person.
✓ Yes, to be honest, I am currently studying electronic guitar recently, so I might have a teacher who is very patient and a nice person.
“currently study”应改为现在进行时“am currently studying”,表示正在进行的动作。句子中“might get a teacher is”结构不正确,应改为“might have a teacher who is”,以正确连接主语和定语从句。
× For example, he was the place.
✓ For example, he was there.
“was the place”用法错误,应该用“was there”表示“他在那里”。“the place”是名词短语,不适合此处用法。