Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Try to use plural forms correctly and avoid redundancy. Also, provide a clear topic sentence followed by specific examples using linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, my school has several rules for students. For example, we are not allowed to wear casual clothes; instead, we must wear the school uniform. This helps maintain discipline and a sense of unity among students.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs clearer structure and more precise vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrases like 'accuracy of student'. Instead, explain benefits with specific reasons.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules. For instance, if students follow the rules strictly, it can improve their discipline and focus in school. Consequently, this leads to better academic performance and a more orderly environment.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to form a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words. Avoid repeating the same idea multiple times.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a favorite teacher who teaches political science. He performs his job very well because he explains topics clearly and in depth. Moreover, he encourages students to think critically, which makes his classes very engaging.

× Yes, there are many rules in my school which is established for student such as do not wear casual clothes at school.

✓ Yes, there are many rules in my school which are established for students, such as not wearing casual clothes at school.

The pronoun 'which' refers to 'rules' which is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. The phrase 'do not wear' should be changed to 'not wearing' to fit the sentence structure correctly.

× Yes, definitely there are many benefits to for students if student obey their rules and one of the promising benefit is that the accuracy of student in school is maintained.

✓ Yes, definitely there are many benefits for students if students obey their rules, and one of the promising benefits is that the accuracy of students in school is maintained.

The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'benefits' and 'their rules'. Also, 'benefit' should be plural 'benefits' to match 'many benefits'. 'Accuracy of student' should be 'accuracy of students' to maintain plural consistency.

× Yes I know my favorite teacher who do his job in very well manner also he teach me political science and he is very good and my favorite teacher because he teach very well and deeply to me.

✓ Yes, I know my favorite teacher who does his job in a very good manner. Also, he teaches me political science and he is very good and my favorite teacher because he teaches very well and explains deeply to me.

The verbs 'do', 'teach', and 'teach' should be in third person singular form 'does' and 'teaches' to agree with the singular subject 'teacher'. The phrase 'in very well manner' is corrected to 'in a very good manner' for proper adjective and article usage. Added punctuation for clarity.