Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are many rules for student in my school such as student do not allow to wear casual clothes at school or classroom because it affect the reputation of school as well as every student.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are many benefits for student if every student follow more rules and this benefit help to student do their work in effective and efficient manner which is also a very good for them.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes I know my favorite teacher who teach me political science and the name of teacher is Pinky. He is very good teacher and do their job very well because he teach every student in briefly which effect their maintenance of sex.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct plural forms and avoid repeating 'student' unnecessarily. Also, make your sentences clearer and more concise.
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to wear casual clothes because it affects the school's reputation and discipline.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar correction. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases like 'very good for them'. Be specific about the benefits.
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules because they help us work more effectively and efficiently. For instance, rules can improve our focus and discipline in class.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'effect their maintenance of sex'. Please use correct verb forms and clarify your meaning. Also, provide specific reasons why the teacher is good.
Ví dụ: Yes, my favorite teacher is Mr. Pinky, who teaches political science. He explains the lessons clearly and patiently, which helps all students understand the subject better.
× Yes, there are many rules for student in my school such as student do not allow to wear casual clothes at school or classroom because it affect the reputation of school as well as every student.
✓ Yes, there are many rules for students in my school such as students are not allowed to wear casual clothes at school or in the classroom because it affects the reputation of the school as well as every student.
The word 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the plural context. Also, 'student do not allow' is incorrect; it should be 'students are not allowed' to express permission correctly. 'It affect' should be 'it affects' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'At school or classroom' should be 'at school or in the classroom' for correct preposition use.
× Yes, there are many rules for student in my school such as student do not allow to wear casual clothes at school or classroom because it affect the reputation of school as well as every student.
✓ Yes, there are many rules for students in my school such as students are not allowed to wear casual clothes at school or in the classroom because it affects the reputation of the school as well as every student.
The phrase 'student do not allow to wear' is incorrect modal verb usage. The correct form is 'students are not allowed to wear' to express prohibition or rules.
× Yes, there are many benefits for student if every student follow more rules and this benefit help to student do their work in effective and efficient manner which is also a very good for them.
✓ Yes, there are many benefits for students if every student follows more rules and these benefits help students do their work in an effective and efficient manner which is also very good for them.
'Benefits for student' should be 'benefits for students' to match plural. 'Every student follow' should be 'every student follows' for subject-verb agreement. 'This benefit help to student' should be 'these benefits help students' to agree in number and correct verb form. 'In effective and efficient manner' needs an article 'an' before 'effective'.
× Yes, there are many benefits for student if every student follow more rules and this benefit help to student do their work in effective and efficient manner which is also a very good for them.
✓ Yes, there are many benefits for students if every student follows more rules and these benefits help students do their work in an effective and efficient manner which is also very good for them.
'Every student follow' is incorrect because 'every student' is singular and requires 'follows'. Similarly, 'this benefit help' should be 'these benefits help' to agree in number and verb form.
× Yes I know my favorite teacher who teach me political science and the name of teacher is Pinky. He is very good teacher and do their job very well because he teach every student in briefly which effect their maintenance of sex.
✓ Yes, I know my favorite teacher who teaches me political science and the name of the teacher is Pinky. He is a very good teacher and does his job very well because he teaches every student briefly which affects their understanding of the subject.
'Who teach me' should be 'who teaches me' for third person singular. 'He is very good teacher' needs an article 'a'. 'Do their job' should be 'does his job' to agree with singular subject and correct pronoun. 'He teach' should be 'he teaches'. 'In briefly' should be 'briefly'. 'Effect their maintenance of sex' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'affects their understanding of the subject'.