Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by making it more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors, and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details with linking words like 'for example' or 'in addition'.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, every student must wear a uniform, which helps maintain discipline. In addition, students are expected to follow the school's values and virtues to promote a positive environment.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect your points logically. Also, provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe more rules can benefit students because they encourage ethical behaviour and help maintain discipline. For instance, clear rules about punctuality can teach students responsibility and time management.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by making it more fluent and natural. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating similar words. Also, try to add more specific examples to support your points.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. My elder brother is a physical education teacher who does his job excellently. He treats his students kindly and motivates them to excel not only in sports but also in their studies and personal development.

× Yes, there are lots of regulations in school as first is uniform that every student have to wear uniform which makes discipline in them.

✓ Yes, there are lots of regulations in school; first is the uniform rule that every student has to wear, which instills discipline in them.

The original sentence has a singular-plural mismatch: 'every student have' should be 'every student has' because 'every student' is singular and requires a singular verb form. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Moreover, every student should obey the values and virtues.

✓ Moreover, every student should obey the values and virtues.

This sentence is grammatically correct with proper modal verb usage; no correction needed.

× Yes, definitely. I think that rules make them more ethical as well as some roles may also make them. To follow the discipline as well as coherence.

✓ Yes, definitely. I think that rules make them more ethical, and some rules may also help them follow discipline as well as maintain coherence.

The original sentence misuses 'roles' instead of 'rules' and has sentence fragments. 'May also make them' is unclear; it should be 'may also help them follow discipline.' The modal verb 'may' is used correctly but the sentence needs restructuring for clarity.

× Yes, I have a teacher who performs his job very well.

✓ Yes, I have a teacher who performs his job very well.

This sentence is correct with subject-verb agreement; no correction needed.

× He's none other than my elder brother.

✓ He is none other than my elder brother.

Contraction 'He's' is acceptable in speech, but for clarity and formality, 'He is' is preferred. No grammatical error, just style.

× He's a teacher of physical education.

✓ He is a physical education teacher.

The original sentence is understandable but 'a teacher of physical education' is less natural than 'a physical education teacher.' No grammatical error but improved phrasing.

× He treats his students very well and encourages them and motivates them in every field.

✓ He treats his students very well and encourages and motivates them in every field.

The sentence is grammatically correct but can be improved by combining 'encourages them and motivates them' to 'encourages and motivates them' for conciseness.