Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are many. Guidelines at my school. We have to wear a uniform at school to make everyone equal and disciplined.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
No. More rows make students. Didn't make their own decision alone.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I was a post graduate student my tutor as well to teach. Hey teach me professional skills and think.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,句子结构不完整,缺少连接词,表达不自然。建议使用完整句子,增加连接词,使回答更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my school. For example, we have to wear a uniform to promote equality and discipline among students.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多,表达不清晰,缺少逻辑连接词,内容不具体。建议使用完整句子,明确表达观点,并用连接词支持观点。
Ví dụ: No, I don't think more rules would benefit students because it might limit their ability to make decisions independently.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误严重,句子不完整,表达不清楚。建议使用完整句子,清晰描述老师的表现和具体教学内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a postgraduate student, my tutor taught me professional skills and encouraged me to think critically.
× Guidelines at my school.
✓ There are guidelines at my school.
原句缺少谓语动词,导致句子结构不完整。应添加“there are”来构成完整句子。
× More rows make students.
✓ More rules make students.
原句中“rows”应为“rules”,这是拼写错误,导致意思不明确。
× Didn't make their own decision alone.
✓ They don't make their own decisions alone.
原句缺少主语,且时态不符合上下文,应补充主语并调整时态。
× Yes, when I was a post graduate student my tutor as well to teach.
✓ Yes, when I was a postgraduate student, my tutor also taught me.
原句缺少谓语动词,且表达不完整,应补充动词并调整表达。
× Hey teach me professional skills and think.
✓ He taught me professional skills and how to think.
原句中“Hey”应为“he”,且“think”需要补充“how to”使表达完整。