Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, for students, they need to follow many rules at school such as they don't allow to talk with their classmate during classes. In addition, they also don't allow to eat snacks.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
I think it depends. Some rules is beneficial for students. Those rules help students to organize their tasks and time efficiency. In addition, some rules have by the influence on them that will restrict their creativity and flexibility.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes. When I was a Senior High School student, my geography teacher was devoted. She was patient with students. In addition, she always used her spare time to answer our questions about geography.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
In my opinion, I prefer to have fever rules at school. I think it helps students become more independent. For example, when there are fewer restrictions, students can manage their time and tasks by themselves.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“they don't allow to talk”应改为“they are not allowed to talk”。建议注意主谓一致和被动语态的正确使用,同时避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules for students at my school. For example, students are not allowed to talk during classes, and eating snacks is also prohibited.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,如“Some rules is beneficial”应为“Some rules are beneficial”,且“have by the influence on them”表达不准确。建议加强语法基础,使用更准确的表达,并且逻辑连接词使用更自然。
Ví dụ: I think it depends. Some rules are beneficial because they help students organize their tasks and manage time efficiently. However, other rules might restrict creativity and flexibility.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰,但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅,如“Moreover”替代“In addition”,并且“devoted”可以用“dedicated”替换以更自然。建议丰富词汇和连接词的使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, when I was in senior high school, my geography teacher was very dedicated. She was patient with all students. Moreover, she often used her spare time to answer our questions about geography.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中“fever”应为“fewer”,存在拼写错误。建议注意拼写准确性,同时可以增加连接词如“because”来增强逻辑性。
Ví dụ: In my opinion, I prefer to have fewer rules at school because it helps students become more independent. For example, with fewer restrictions, students can manage their time and tasks by themselves.
× they don't allow to talk with their classmate during classes.
✓ they are not allowed to talk with their classmates during classes.
这里“don't allow to”用法错误,应该用被动语态“are not allowed to”表示禁止行为;同时“classmate”应为复数形式“classmates”。
× they also don't allow to eat snacks.
✓ they are also not allowed to eat snacks.
同样,“don't allow to”用法错误,需改为被动语态“are not allowed to”表示禁止行为。
× Some rules is beneficial for students.
✓ Some rules are beneficial for students.
主语“rules”为复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”,而非单数“is”。
× Those rules help students to organize their tasks and time efficiency.
✓ Those rules help students to organize their tasks and manage their time efficiently.
“time efficiency”用法不当,应改为动词短语“manage their time efficiently”更符合表达习惯。
× some rules have by the influence on them that will restrict their creativity and flexibility.
✓ some rules have an influence on them that restricts their creativity and flexibility.
“have by the influence”结构错误,应改为“have an influence”;谓语动词应与主语“some rules”保持一致,使用单数“restricts”。
× I prefer to have fever rules at school.
✓ I prefer to have fewer rules at school.
“fever”拼写错误,应为“fewer”,表示“更少的”,用于可数名词“rules”。