Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is quite long and repetitive, which affects clarity. Try to make your response more concise and grammatically correct by using singular/plural forms properly and avoiding redundancy. Also, start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question.

Ví dụ: Yes, my school has several important rules that all students must follow to maintain discipline and order.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas logically. Also, be more specific about how rules benefit students and avoid vague phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students benefit from more rules because these help them develop good behaviour and prepare them for a stable future.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Use clear and simple sentences to describe your experience. Also, avoid unnecessary words like 'Thank you' in your answer. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a very dedicated English teacher in 3rd grade at Chhabra CMI Public School. She was excellent at teaching and understood every student's attitude well.

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to clearly state your preference and explain your reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and use correct singular/plural forms.

Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules at school because it allows students to learn important responsibilities and the school's culture without feeling restricted.

× Yes, there are many rules that is a mandatory for every children's in the school and a school has a large act and many rules that must be obeyed by the students and there is there are many restrictions.

✓ Yes, there are many rules that are mandatory for every child in the school, and the school has a large act and many rules that must be obeyed by the students, and there are many restrictions.

The phrase 'rules that is a mandatory' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural and should be followed by 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'children's' is possessive and incorrect here; it should be the plural noun 'children' or singular 'child' depending on context. Here, 'every child' is correct because 'every' is followed by a singular noun. Additionally, 'there is there are' is redundant; only 'there are' is needed for plural 'restrictions'.

× Yes, of course, I know that students would benefit more from more rules and they will behave and obey that restrictions that the school has provided.

✓ Yes, of course, I know that students would benefit more from more rules and they will behave and obey the restrictions that the school has provided.

The phrase 'obey that restrictions' is incorrect because 'that' is singular demonstrative adjective, but 'restrictions' is plural. The correct plural demonstrative adjective is 'the' or 'those'. Here, 'the restrictions' is appropriate. This is related to article and demonstrative adjective usage, which falls under modal verb usage as per the list.

× And the students must obey all the rules and they will become a good man in the future and his or her life will become stable when they becoming and when they come to their future life.

✓ And the students must obey all the rules and they will become good people in the future, and their lives will become stable when they grow up and when they come to their future life.

The phrase 'they will become a good man' is incorrect because 'they' is plural and 'a good man' is singular. It should be 'good people' or 'good men and women'. Also, 'his or her life' is singular, but 'they' is plural, so it should be 'their lives'. The phrase 'when they becoming' is incorrect; it should be 'when they grow up' or 'when they become'. These are singular/plural agreement and verb form issues.

× Yes, I had a really dedicated teacher and allowed that teacher very much and it's my favorite English miss when I was studying in 3rd standard at Chhabra CMI Public School, Pala in Kerala.

✓ Yes, I had a really dedicated teacher and liked that teacher very much, and she was my favorite English teacher when I was studying in 3rd standard at Chhabra CMI Public School, Pala in Kerala.

The phrase 'allowed that teacher very much' is incorrect; likely the intended verb is 'liked'. Also, 'it's my favorite English miss' is incorrect; 'it's' is present tense and 'miss' is informal and incorrect here. It should be 'she was my favorite English teacher' to match past tense context. These are past tense and word choice issues.

× And I know that she's a very brilliant actor teaching and she knows every, every attitude of a child.

✓ And I know that she's a very brilliant teacher and she understands every attitude of a child.

The phrase 'brilliant actor teaching' is incorrect; likely intended is 'brilliant teacher'. Also, 'knows every, every attitude' is awkward; 'understands every attitude' is better. This is an incorrect use of adjectives and word choice.

× I prefer to have a minimum rules at the school because students want to learn all the obligations and all the rules that the school has provided and it is a mandatory thing to obey that.

✓ I prefer to have a minimum number of rules at the school because students want to learn all the obligations and all the rules that the school has provided, and it is mandatory to obey them.

The phrase 'a minimum rules' is incorrect because 'rules' is plural and 'a minimum' requires a singular noun or a quantifier phrase like 'a minimum number of'. Also, 'obey that' is incorrect; it should be 'obey them' referring to the plural 'rules'. These are singular/plural and pronoun usage issues.

× The students want to learn all the attitude, all the rules, all the culture of a school and to behave as such a good man in their life.

✓ The students want to learn all the attitudes, all the rules, all the culture of the school and to behave as good people in their lives.

The phrase 'all the attitude' is incorrect because 'attitude' is countable here and should be plural 'attitudes'. Also, 'as such a good man' is incorrect for plural 'students'; it should be 'as good people'. 'In their life' should be 'in their lives' to match plural subject. These are adjective and singular/plural agreement issues.