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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Thí sinh

Yes, there are many rules. In my university, for example, students are not allowed to treat in their tests. If they're prejudice behavior was discovered, they will be punished or even expelled from the school. Besides, we also have many rules to create a more.

Giám khảo

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Thí sinh

I think to some extent roles can be beneficial to students study and research because it create a more favorable environment so students can learn better. But I think over uh excessive rules can put students under stress so a balance is needed.

Giám khảo

Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?

Thí sinh

Uh, I have a very delicate teacher in my university. His name is Doctor Wang uh, because he is still a doctor in my university, but but she can told us, uh, I think he, he is very dedicated because he do many works, both study and uh.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?

Thí sinh

I don't want to have any more rules umm because I think nowadays there there is enough rules and these rules can definitely create a more favorable study environment for us. And the the adding rules will put us under suggest and be restricted.

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Part 1

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,例如“treat in their tests”应为“cheat in their tests”,“prejudice behavior”表达不准确。建议加强语法基础,使用更准确的词汇,并且回答应完整表达意思,避免句子未完结。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my university. For example, students are not allowed to cheat during exams. If someone is caught cheating, they may be punished or even expelled. Besides that, there are other rules to maintain order and create a better learning environment.

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“roles”应为“rules”,“it create”应为“it creates”。建议注意主谓一致和单复数形式,同时可以使用连接词如“however”使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: I think to some extent, rules can benefit students' study and research because they create a more favorable environment for learning. However, excessive rules may cause stress, so a balance is necessary.

Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答中多处语法错误和表达混乱,如“delicate”应为“dedicated”,“she can told us”不合语法。建议加强句子结构练习,避免重复和语无伦次,清晰表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a very dedicated teacher at my university. His name is Doctor Wang. He works hard in both teaching and research, and he always helps students with their questions.

Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当,如“there is enough rules”应为“there are enough rules”,“put us under suggest”应为“put us under stress”。建议注意语法和词汇准确性,避免重复词汇。

Ví dụ: I don't want more rules because I think there are already enough rules that create a good study environment. Adding more rules might cause stress and restrict students too much.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× If they're prejudice behavior was discovered, they will be punished or even expelled from the school.

If their prejudiced behavior was discovered, they would be punished or even expelled from the school.

这里的条件句是虚拟语气,表示假设情况,主句应使用情态动词would而不是will,且prejudice应为形容词形式prejudiced,their拼写错误。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× If they're prejudice behavior was discovered, they will be punished or even expelled from the school.

If their prejudiced behavior was discovered, they would be punished or even expelled from the school.

prejudice是名词或动词,作为形容词应使用prejudiced,表示有偏见的。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× If they're prejudice behavior was discovered, they will be punished or even expelled from the school.

If their prejudiced behavior was discovered, they would be punished or even expelled from the school.

they're是they are的缩写,错误地代替了their,their表示所属关系,符合句意。

Singular and plural issue

× Besides, we also have many rules to create a more.

Besides, we also have many rules to create a better environment.

句子不完整,more后缺少名词,需补充名词如environment,且better更符合语境。

Singular and plural issue

× I think to some extent roles can be beneficial to students study and research because it create a more favorable environment so students can learn better.

I think to some extent rules can be beneficial to students' study and research because it creates a more favorable environment so students can learn better.

roles应为rules,表示规则;students study应为students' study,表示所有格;it create应为it creates,主谓一致。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× I think to some extent roles can be beneficial to students study and research because it create a more favorable environment so students can learn better.

I think to some extent rules can be beneficial to students' study and research because it creates a more favorable environment so students can learn better.

主语it是单数,谓语动词create应加s变为creates,保持主谓一致。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Uh, I have a very delicate teacher in my university. His name is Doctor Wang uh, because he is still a doctor in my university, but but she can told us, uh, I think he, he is very dedicated because he do many works, both study and uh.

Uh, I have a very dedicated teacher in my university. His name is Doctor Wang. He is still a doctor in my university, and he can tell us a lot. I think he is very dedicated because he does many works, both study and research.

delicate应为dedicated,表示敬业的;she错误地代替he;told应为tell,时态错误;do应为does,主谓一致;works前缺少冠词或复数形式。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Uh, I have a very delicate teacher in my university. His name is Doctor Wang uh, because he is still a doctor in my university, but but she can told us, uh, I think he, he is very dedicated because he do many works, both study and uh.

Uh, I have a very dedicated teacher in my university. His name is Doctor Wang. He is still a doctor in my university, and he can tell us a lot. I think he is very dedicated because he does many works, both study and research.

he do应为he does,主谓一致。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Uh, I have a very delicate teacher in my university. His name is Doctor Wang uh, because he is still a doctor in my university, but but she can told us, uh, I think he, he is very dedicated because he do many works, both study and uh.

Uh, I have a very dedicated teacher in my university. His name is Doctor Wang. He is still a doctor in my university, and he can tell us a lot. I think he is very dedicated because he does many works, both study and research.

but but she用错人称代词,应为he。

Singular and plural issue

× And the the adding rules will put us under suggest and be restricted.

And adding more rules will put us under stress and restrict us.

suggest应为stress,意思是压力;be restricted表达不自然,改为restrict us更符合语境。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BetterSuperior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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